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Message de bilal54 posté le 10-06-2017 à 10:50:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois rédiger un texte sur "My dream for my future", c'est juste pour vérifier s'ilne y'a n'y a pas de grosses fautes, s'il vous plait.
Merci pour votre aide..
In my future I want to become a football player because it's my passion and i've been playing since when i was six years old. I think i will be a good a football player Every year i going to a lot of football tournament but to will be a football player it's necessary to make many sacrifices as part from his family to go to a big team.If i will be a football player i will help people that need my help. When we are football player we ear a lot of money to the poor man. If i will be a football player i want to become an example for thé young people.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-06-2017 11:22
Message de bilal54 posté le 10-06-2017 à 10:50:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois rédiger un texte sur "My dream for my future", c'est juste pour vérifier s'il
Merci pour votre aide..
In my future I want to become a football player because it's my passion and i've been playing since when i was six years old. I think i will be a good a football player Every year i going to a lot of football tournament but to will be a football player it's necessary to make many sacrifices as part from his family to go to a big team.If i will be a football player i will help people that need my help. When we are football player we ear a lot of money to the poor man. If i will be a football player i want to become an example for thé young people.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-06-2017 11:22
Réponse : Correction/football de here4u, postée le 10-06-2017 à 12:14:08 (S | E)
Hello!
Attention !
le pronom "I", prend toujours une majuscule. C'est une faute de ne pas la mettre ! 
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