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Message de diegoooo posté le 01-05-2017 à 18:55:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis très nul, j'ai un sujet que je dois rendre demain qui est ci-dessous, il est noté; quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider à le corriger !?
Merci d'avance.
When I was little, I was traveling on a boat to go to Mexico to Huatulco, a beautiful city, and I went with my family to stay for 3 years in peace.
During the shark several sharks came and jostled the boat, the more time spent, the more they jostled, those who turned the boat.
But strong as I am I had succeeded in blow of punch to repel them and to kill them. The only problem was that there was a lot of jellyfish and we were stung on all sides. A few minutes later we found the island and docked on a very nice beach where we had spent the night.
The next day we found no other hotel and had a great time
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2017 23:12
Message de diegoooo posté le 01-05-2017 à 18:55:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis très nul, j'ai un sujet que je dois rendre demain qui est ci-dessous, il est noté; quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider à le corriger !?
Merci d'avance.
When I was little, I was traveling on a boat to go to Mexico to Huatulco, a beautiful city, and I went with my family to stay for 3 years in peace.
During the shark several sharks came and jostled the boat, the more time spent, the more they jostled, those who turned the boat.
But strong as I am I had succeeded in blow of punch to repel them and to kill them. The only problem was that there was a lot of jellyfish and we were stung on all sides. A few minutes later we found the island and docked on a very nice beach where we had spent the night.
The next day we found no other hotel and had a great time
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2017 23:12
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