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Message de fannydarois posté le 20-04-2017 à 15:56:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je passe mon bac d'oral dans deux semaines et j'aimerai vos avis 'il vous plait
je vous remercie d'avance :
I'm going to talk about the notion: idea of progress. Progress can be defined as an improvement, a developement or a change, a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place. I'm going to try to answers at: Should we fear about progress ?
On the one hand, progress is necessary, on the other hand, It can be scary.
First of all we shouldn't be afraid of progress. Indeed thank to progress we can choose the sex of our child. An institu proposes couples the oportunity to be able to choose the sex of their future baby in order to balance their family. These procedure is pretty similaire to the one explained by the genetic in Gattaca. In fact, in Gattaca parents can choose too the features they prefer for their future baby. We may in the future choose the skin color or the color of their hair. Furthermore, cloning is also an advantage of progress. In Brave New World , the cloning process is called bokanovski in order to create many identical humans being. It allows to have more indentical human who would make run identical machines. Moreover, in the document Man vs Machine we can see that robots is very smart because they can out calculated, explored places that we couldn't ge to for exemple mars, or they can beat champions at chess. So we can say that the progress have advantages.
In the second time, we can be afraid of progress. Indeed, in Man vs Machine, peoples can fear that one day machines might become more powerfull that men whith technological progess, man might be dominated and rules by machines. Consequently, human it might be either enslaved or eradicated. What is more, in the power of google is accuse of not respecting antitrust rules and of manipulating internet users though their research into visiting their website than others ones.
To sum up, progress can be essential for humans but progress is neither all good or bad. This can be used for medecine or great advance. However, progress can destroy the world with weapons for exemple.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2017 00:20
Message de fannydarois posté le 20-04-2017 à 15:56:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je passe mon bac d'oral dans deux semaines et j'aimerai vos avis 'il vous plait
je vous remercie d'avance :
I'm going to talk about the notion: idea of progress. Progress can be defined as an improvement, a developement or a change, a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place. I'm going to try to answers at: Should we fear about progress ?
On the one hand, progress is necessary, on the other hand, It can be scary.
First of all we shouldn't be afraid of progress. Indeed thank to progress we can choose the sex of our child. An institu proposes couples the oportunity to be able to choose the sex of their future baby in order to balance their family. These procedure is pretty similaire to the one explained by the genetic in Gattaca. In fact, in Gattaca parents can choose too the features they prefer for their future baby. We may in the future choose the skin color or the color of their hair. Furthermore, cloning is also an advantage of progress. In Brave New World , the cloning process is called bokanovski in order to create many identical humans being. It allows to have more indentical human who would make run identical machines. Moreover, in the document Man vs Machine we can see that robots is very smart because they can out calculated, explored places that we couldn't ge to for exemple mars, or they can beat champions at chess. So we can say that the progress have advantages.
In the second time, we can be afraid of progress. Indeed, in Man vs Machine, peoples can fear that one day machines might become more powerfull that men whith technological progess, man might be dominated and rules by machines. Consequently, human it might be either enslaved or eradicated. What is more, in the power of google is accuse of not respecting antitrust rules and of manipulating internet users though their research into visiting their website than others ones.
To sum up, progress can be essential for humans but progress is neither all good or bad. This can be used for medecine or great advance. However, progress can destroy the world with weapons for exemple.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-04-2017 00:20
Réponse : Bac/Idea of progress de laure95, postée le 20-04-2017 à 17:46:09 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- I'm going to try to answers (to + infintif)at (enlever at)
-On the one hand, progress is necessary, on the other hand, It can be scary: c'est ton annonce de plan?
- Indeed thank(s) to progress we can choose the sex of our child.
-An institu
-the oportunity: orthographe.
- These procedure: these + pluriel.
- similaire: mot français.
- thefor
- many identical humans being: mettre le pluriel sur being pas sur human.
- It allows to have more indentical human (pluriel)
- robots is (faute de conjugaison) very smart
- because they can out calculated, explored places: can + infinitif.
- the (pas de the) progress have advantages.
- powerfull: orthographe.
- whith
- technological progess, man might be dominated and rules (participe passé)by machines.
- human it (it?)might be either enslaved or eradicated.
- What is more, in the power of google is accuse (participe passé) of
- internet users though their research into visiting their website than others ones:?
- progress is neither all good (n)or bad.
- medecine: mot français.
- exemple: orthographe.
Réponse : Bac/Idea of progress de fannydarois, postée le 21-04-2017 à 14:28:40 (S | E)
bonjour ^^ merci pour votre aide
oui c'est l'annonce du plan, pourquoi ?
"an istitu" je ne vois pas la faute
"thefor" je ne comprends pas
je vous remercie d'avance ^^
I'm going to talk about the notion: idea of progress. Progress can be defined as an improvement, a developement or a change, a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place. I'm going to try to answers : Should we fear about progress ?
On the one hand, progress is necessary, on the other hand, It can be scary.
First of all we shouldn't be afraid of progress. Indeed thanks to progress we can choose the sex of our child. An institu proposes couples the opportunity to be able to choose the sex of their future baby in order to balance their family. These procedures is pretty similare to the one explained by the genetic in Gattaca. In fact, in Gattaca parents can choose too the features they prefer for their future baby. We may in the future choose the skin color or the color of their hair. Furthermore, cloning is also an advantage of progress. In Brave New World , the cloning process is called bokanovski in order to create many identical human beings. It allows to have more indentical humans who would make run identical machines. Moreover, in the document Man vs Machine we can see that robots are very smart because they can out calculated, explore places that we couldn't ge to for exemple mars, or they can beat champions at chess. So we can say that progress have advantages.
In the second time, we can be afraid of progress. Indeed, in Man vs Machine, peoples can fear that one day machines might become more powerful that men with technological progess, man might be dominated and ruled by machines. Consequently, humanity might be either enslaved or eradicated. What is more, in the power of google is accused of not respecting antitrust rules and of manipulating internet users though their research into visiting their website rather than others.
To sum up, progress can be essential for humans but progress is neither all good or all bad. This can be used for medicine or great advance. However, progress can destroy the world with weapons for example.
Réponse : Bac/Idea of progress de laure95, postée le 22-04-2017 à 13:56:04 (S | E)
Bonjour,
oui c'est l'annonce du plan, pourquoi ?: tu n'annonces pas en tant que plan: "first...second"
"an istitu" je ne vois pas la faute : il manque des lettres.
"thefor" je ne comprends pas: il manque une voyelle à la fin.
- to answers : to + infinitif.
- Should we fear about (pas de about)progress ?
- These procedures is (faute de conjugaison)pretty similare (orthographe)to the one explained by the genetic(s)
_ they can out calculated: ?
- ge to for exemple mars, or they can beat champions at chess. So we can say that progress have advantages.
Réponse : Bac/Idea of progress de fannydarois, postée le 22-04-2017 à 14:41:48 (S | E)
Bonjour
je ne vois vraiment pas où j'ai écrit thefore ?
"pretty similar" je ne vois pas la faute d'
j'espère que cette fois-ci ce sera bon ;)
I'm going to talk about the notion: idea of progress. Progress can be defined as an improvement, a developement or a change, a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place. I'm going to try to answers to : Should we fear of progress ?
in fisrt time, progress is necessary,in second time It can be scary.
First of all we shouldn't be afraid of progress. Indeed thanks to progress we can choose the sex of our child. An institution proposes couples the opportunity to be able to choose the sex of their future baby in order to balance their family. These procedures are pretty similare to the one explained by the genetics in Gattaca. In fact, in Gattaca parents can choose too the features they prefer for their future baby. We may in the future choose the skin color or the color of their hair. Furthermore, cloning is also an advantage of progress. In Brave New World , the cloning process is called bokanovski in order to create many identical human beings. It allows to have more indentical humans who would make run identical machines. Moreover, in the document Man vs Machine we can see that robots are very smart because they can rapidly calculated , explore places that we couldn't get to for example mars, or they can beat champions at chess. So we can say that progress have advantages.
In the second time, we can be afraid of progress. Indeed, in Man vs Machine, peoples can fear that one day machines might become more powerful that men with technological progess, man might be dominated and ruled by machines. Consequently, humanity might be either enslaved or eradicated. What is more, in the power of google is accused of not respecting antitrust rules and of manipulating internet users though their research into visiting their website rather than others.
To sum up, progress can be essential for humans but progress is neither all good or all bad. This can be used for medicine or great advance. However, progress can destroy the world with weapons for example.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-04-2017 15:06
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