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Message de maeva7549 posté le 26-02-2017 à 14:03:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
dans le cadre d'un débat en groupe proposé par mon enseignant je dois rédiger cinq arguments pour le sujet suivant: Pour ou contre le travail de groupe aux beaux arts ?
J'ai donc rédigé cinq arguments mais je pense que la syntaxe comporte des fautes... pourriez-vous m'aider?
Merci d'avance
Les arguments rédigés:
1. I think that to work in a group on the School of Fine Arts is complicated because we are used to working alone for our artistic projects.
2. I think that it is difficult to confront different creative personalities because each in the own vision and its own universe
3. It is difficult to work in a group because often we make cross his personal work before that of the group.
4. I believe that the group work in the creation depends many of the confronted personalities
5. If you make a group work for the School of Fine Arts you have to find somebody who works well with you and with a close universe.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-02-2017 14:18
Message de maeva7549 posté le 26-02-2017 à 14:03:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
dans le cadre d'un débat en groupe proposé par mon enseignant je dois rédiger cinq arguments pour le sujet suivant: Pour ou contre le travail de groupe aux beaux arts ?
J'ai donc rédigé cinq arguments mais je pense que la syntaxe comporte des fautes... pourriez-vous m'aider?
Merci d'avance
Les arguments rédigés:
1. I think that to work in a group on the School of Fine Arts is complicated because we are used to working alone for our artistic projects.
2. I think that it is difficult to confront different creative personalities because each in the own vision and its own universe
3. It is difficult to work in a group because often we make cross his personal work before that of the group.
4. I believe that the group work in the creation depends many of the confronted personalities
5. If you make a group work for the School of Fine Arts you have to find somebody who works well with you and with a close universe.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-02-2017 14:18
Réponse : Débat/5 arguments de gerondif, postée le 26-02-2017 à 18:15:41 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu corrections en vert
1. I think that to work (plutôt working) in a group on the School of Fine Arts is complicated because we are used to working alone for/on our artistic projects.
2. I think that it is difficult to confront different creative personalities because each in the(because everyone of us has his own vision...) own vision and its own universe
3. It is difficult to work in a group because often we make cross(au sens de faire passer ? ça ne va pas, essayez mettre en avant) his (plutôt our, puisque le sujet est we)personal work before that of the group.
4. I believe that
5. If you make a group work for the School of Fine Arts you have to find somebody who works well with you and with(plutôt dans) a close (close au sens de proche ou closed au sens de confined ?) universe.
Réponse : Débat/5 arguments de maeva7549, postée le 26-02-2017 à 21:43:48 (S | E)
merci beaucoup pour votre aide
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