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Message de xerxes posté le 04-12-2016 à 14:41:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjours à tous,
Je dois faire une rédaction en anglais sur un service de partage (imaginé), j'ai donc fini la rédaction mais aurais besoin de votre aide pour trouver d'éventuelles fautes.
Merci d'avance
I will present a service that allows you to share the objects of the daily between neighbors. Indeed if you do not own an object you can rent it at low cost. Favour to this service you will be able to use an object without having to pay it in store. It also saves a lot of money. However if the object is losing it you will have to pay it back or find a deal with your neighbor. Our service aims to guaranted a mutual trust between neighbors in these occasions. To use this service you must register on a site. In this way you will have access to the list of the nearest neighbors who are registered. To guarantee the maintenance of the service you will have to pay ten percent of the rental price of the object you rent. Finally, I hope this presentation will convince you to support our project.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-12-2016 15:49
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Modifié par xerxes le 08-12-2016 19:28
Message de xerxes posté le 04-12-2016 à 14:41:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjours à tous,
Je dois faire une rédaction en anglais sur un service de partage (imaginé), j'ai donc fini la rédaction mais aurais besoin de votre aide pour trouver d'éventuelles fautes.
Merci d'avance
I will present a service that allows you to share the objects of the daily between neighbors. Indeed if you do not own an object you can rent it at low cost. Favour to this service you will be able to use an object without having to pay it in store. It also saves a lot of money. However if the object is losing it you will have to pay it back or find a deal with your neighbor. Our service aims to guaranted a mutual trust between neighbors in these occasions. To use this service you must register on a site. In this way you will have access to the list of the nearest neighbors who are registered. To guarantee the maintenance of the service you will have to pay ten percent of the rental price of the object you rent. Finally, I hope this presentation will convince you to support our project.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-12-2016 15:49
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Modifié par xerxes le 08-12-2016 19:28
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