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Message de theavy posté le 08-11-2016 à 04:25:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
Je suis Theavy. Je voudraisvous me corriger de faire des erreurs que vous m'aidiez à corriger mes erreurs s'il vous plait.
Mercid’avant d'avance pour vos réponses.
Nowadays, there are many accidents in Cambodia that cause of people death and injure. There are three reasons that make have road accidents such as no driving license, breaking traffic law and making a call on mobile while driving.
The first reason is that drivers did not have driving license. Many people did not want to study driving because they are poor; they just study from their parents, friends or themselves. So, it make them is lack of understanding the traffic laws. Besides, they did not know the traffic signs and how to drive as well. The second reason is that drivers break traffic law when they were driving the vehicle. Now, in Cambodia, we have the laws to punish somebody who does not obey the traffic laws but the laws are not strict enough. They do not care about the traffic laws. Mostly people drive over speed limit. For instance, the traffic laws say that people must to drive speed 40 kilometers per one hour in public gathering but people still drive over speed limit. Furthermore, in Phnom Penh, most people do not obey the traffic light. When they saw the red light, they still continue driving. One more, traffic laws do not allow people whom drink beer cannot drive. In contrast, they still do that they do not worry about the accident when they lose consciousness. The last reason is making a call on mobile while driving. It is also a big problem. While they are making a call or getting the phone, they use only one hand for driving. Thus, they cannot control or concentrate on driving. Because of they did not watch the road and passenger around them.
In conclusion, drivers must think all these problems and all of us must respect the traffic laws to reduce the traffic accidents. Government should strengthen the rules and expand the road bigger than now for easy to travel.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-11-2016 08:24
Message de theavy posté le 08-11-2016 à 04:25:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
Je suis Theavy. Je voudrais
Merci
Nowadays, there are many accidents in Cambodia that cause of people death and injure. There are three reasons that make have road accidents such as no driving license, breaking traffic law and making a call on mobile while driving.
The first reason is that drivers did not have driving license. Many people did not want to study driving because they are poor; they just study from their parents, friends or themselves. So, it make them is lack of understanding the traffic laws. Besides, they did not know the traffic signs and how to drive as well. The second reason is that drivers break traffic law when they were driving the vehicle. Now, in Cambodia, we have the laws to punish somebody who does not obey the traffic laws but the laws are not strict enough. They do not care about the traffic laws. Mostly people drive over speed limit. For instance, the traffic laws say that people must to drive speed 40 kilometers per one hour in public gathering but people still drive over speed limit. Furthermore, in Phnom Penh, most people do not obey the traffic light. When they saw the red light, they still continue driving. One more, traffic laws do not allow people whom drink beer cannot drive. In contrast, they still do that they do not worry about the accident when they lose consciousness. The last reason is making a call on mobile while driving. It is also a big problem. While they are making a call or getting the phone, they use only one hand for driving. Thus, they cannot control or concentrate on driving. Because of they did not watch the road and passenger around them.
In conclusion, drivers must think all these problems and all of us must respect the traffic laws to reduce the traffic accidents. Government should strengthen the rules and expand the road bigger than now for easy to travel.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-11-2016 08:24
Réponse : Traffic/accidents de laure95, postée le 10-11-2016 à 18:44:40 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- that cause of (enlever OF)people (il manque la marque de l'appartenance) death and injure (ce n'est pas un nom).
- that make have (chercher la traduction du verbe "provoquer")road accidents
- and making a call on (with au lieu de ON + il faut un article)mobile while driving.
- The first reason is that (some)drivers did not (présent)have driving license.
- Many people did not (présent) want to study driving
- they just study from (with à la place de from)their parents, friends or (by) themselves.
- So, it make them is lack of understanding the traffic laws: mal dit.
- Besides, they did not (présent) know the traffic signs
- The second reason is that drivers break traffic law(s) when they were driving (présent simple)the (mettre un possesif à la palce de THE)vehicle(s).
- Now: pas le bon mot ici.
-in Cambodia, we have the (pas de THE) laws to punish somebody who does not obey (pa le bon mot ici)the traffic laws
- but the (pas de THE) laws are not strict enough.
- For instance, the (pas de THE)traffic laws say (des gens disent pas des lois) that people must to (pas de TO)drive speed 40 kilometers per one (pas de ONE) hour in public gathering
- most people do not obey (pas le bon verbe: traduire: "respecter")the traffic light(s).
- When they saw (présent)the red light,
- One more: ?
- traffic laws do not allow people whom (pas le bon relatif)drink beer cannot (to, pas cannot)drive
- they still do
-that they do: ?
- not worry: mal dit.
- While they are making a call or getting the phone, they use (présent en be +-ing)only one hand
- for driving: to + infinitif.
- Because of (à enlever) they did not (présent)watch the road and passenger(s) around them.
- In conclusion, drivers must think (about)all these problems
- for easy to travel: enlever FOR et changer l'ordre des mots.
Réponse : Traffic/accidents de theavy, postée le 28-11-2016 à 16:54:35 (S | E)
Merci Laure pour votre corrigé. Je suis très contente que vous corrigez mes erreurs. J’espère que vous encore continue corriger. Je vous remercie beaucoup pour votre passe du temps. C’est mon nouveau texte.
Nowadays, there are many accidents in Cambodia and many people died and were injured. There are three reasons that causes have road accidents such as no driving license, breaking traffic law and making a call on the mobile while driving.
The first reason is that some drivers do not have driving license. Many people do not want to study driving because they are poor; they just study with their parents, friends or by themselves. So, they have a lack of understanding in the traffic laws. Besides, they do not know the traffic signs and how to drive as well. The second reason is that drivers break traffic laws when they are driving a vehicle. Nowadays, in Cambodia, we have laws to punish somebody who does not obey the traffic laws but the laws are not strict enough. They do not care about the traffic laws. Mostly people drive over speed limit. For instance, traffic laws have made that people must drive speed 40 kilometers per hour in public gathering but people still drive over speed limit. Furthermore, in Phnom Penh, most people do not respect the traffic lights. When they see the red light, they still continue driving. One more, traffic laws do not allow people that have drunk beer to drive. Despite that, they still do drink and they do not worry about the accidents when they lose consciousness. The last reason is making a call on mobile while driving. It is also a big problem. While they are making a call or getting the phone, they are using only one hand to drive. Thus, they cannot control or concentrate on driving. Because of they do not watch the road and passengers around them.
In conclusion, drivers must think about all these problems and all of us must respect the traffic laws to reduce the traffic accidents. Government should strengthen the rules and expand the road bigger than now to make it easier to travel.
Bonne chance,
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