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Message de vadim93 posté le 27-10-2016 à 17:26:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai une description à faire de moi en anglais sous forme de poème (on avait un exemple); est-ce que vous pouvez me dire si cela est correct s'il vous plait?
Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses.
I am sociable, funny and passionate
I adore being with my family
I like speaking with my friends
I like speaking of my favorite sport with other people
I am an altruistic with my close
It s my personality
I like joking with my friends
I always am ready to party
I always wake up with an good mood
I always am happiness
It s my personality
I love swimming
I would like to meet my idol : Florent Manaudou
I would like to win a national competitition of swim
I would like come back in my country with a medal of Olympic Games
It s my personality
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-10-2016 19:17
Message de vadim93 posté le 27-10-2016 à 17:26:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai une description à faire de moi en anglais sous forme de poème (on avait un exemple); est-ce que vous pouvez me dire si cela est correct s'il vous plait?
Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses.
I am sociable, funny and passionate
I adore being with my family
I like speaking with my friends
I like speaking of my favorite sport with other people
I am an altruistic with my close
It s my personality
I like joking with my friends
I always am ready to party
I always wake up with an good mood
I always am happiness
It s my personality
I love swimming
I would like to meet my idol : Florent Manaudou
I would like to win a national competitition of swim
I would like come back in my country with a medal of Olympic Games
It s my personality
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-10-2016 19:17
Réponse : Décrire/vadim de laure95, postée le 30-10-2016 à 14:29:50 (S | E)
Bonjour,
I am sociable, funny and passionate
I adore being with my family
I like speaking with my friends
I like speaking of my favorite sport with other people
I am an altruistic with my close: ALTRUIST.
It s my personality
I like joking with my friends
I always am ready to party: ALWAYS n'est pas à la bonne place + mettre PARTY au pluriel.
I always wake up with an good mood: AN + MOT COMMENCANT PAR UNE VOYELLE.
I always am happiness: ALWAYS n'est pas à la bonne place + cette phrase ne veut rien dire.
It s my personality
I love swimming
I would like to meet my idol : Florent Manaudou
I would like to win a national competitition of swim: SWIMMING COMPETITION.
I would like come back in my country with a medal of Olympic Games: il manque TO après LIKE + IN n'est pas la bonne préposition ici+ AN OLYMPIC GAMES MEDAL.
It s my personality
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