Good introduction/aide
Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En basRéponse : Good introduction/aide de gerondif, postée le 17-10-2016 à 21:12:47 (S | E)
Bonjour,
on parle à quelqu'un: you speak to somebody, you talk to somebody.
To talk signifie davantage "causer" que parler, il est un peu maladroit en situation officielle.
erreurs en bleu
I'm going to talk you about crowdfunding. It's a practice more and more used (il vaudrait mieux mettre un verbe: soit: this practice is more and more used ou it is a practice which is more and more used) to fund a project by raising money from a large number of people who each contribute a relatively small amount. In the first part I'm going to talk you about how works (mettez le verbe après le sujet, pas d'inversion en style indirect) crowdfunding in practice. In the second part I'm going to talk you about the different types of projects and how they are validated, after (jamais de after tout seul, soit after that, soit then) I will explain (on explique à quelqu'un)you for who is it(pas d'inversion en style indirect, même en français: je vais vous dire pour qui est-ce intéressant ? non) interesting, and then I will end on(verbe et préposition à revoir) main risks of this practice.
Réponse : Good introduction/aide de keke17, postée le 18-10-2016 à 13:48:15 (S | E)
Merci de m'avoir aidé,
Je mets ce que j'ai modifié :
I'm going to speak you about crowdfunding. This practice is more and more used to fund a project by raising money from a large number of people who each contribute a relatively small amount. In the first part I'm going to speak you about how crowdfunding works in practice. In the second part I'm going to talk you about the different types of projects and how they are validated, after that I will explain you for whom it's interesting, and then I will finish on the main risks of this practice.
Réponse : Good introduction/aide de gerondif, postée le 18-10-2016 à 23:39:57 (S | E)
Bonjour
On parle à quelqu'un: you speak to somebody, you talk to somebody.
I'm going to speak ** you about crowdfunding. This practice is more and more used to fund a project by raising money from a large number of people who each contribute a relatively small amount. In the first part I'm going to speak ** you about how crowdfunding works in practice. In the second part I'm going to talk **you about the different types of projects and how they are validated, after that I will explain to you for whom it's interesting (interesting ou profitable ? Il vaudrait mieux en anglais moderne dire ... who interesting for) it is, and then I will finish with a few remarks about the main risks of this practice.
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