Correction/Terry Jones
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Message de sysie posté le 19-06-2016 à 12:16:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un paragraphe sur Terry Jones à rendre.Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes, s'il vous plait?
Voici ce que j'ai mis:
Terry Jones is 32 years old and he is single. He doesn't have children.
In five years ago, he worked in a shop in Pennsylvania but he didn't like his life, he was bored.
Now, he has been for world explorer because he has never liked his job, he will be more adventure and he has lived out his dreams.
Terry Jones has already been to Asia three times, to Africa and all over to Europe. He has discoveried a cultures, a lifestyles, people different of the continent.
Last year, he has been to North Pole. It was very hard but he has loved silence and a ice. He was with 8 dogs to the expeditions.
He would like to visit Australia.
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-06-2016 22:08
Message de sysie posté le 19-06-2016 à 12:16:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un paragraphe sur Terry Jones à rendre.Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes, s'il vous plait?
Voici ce que j'ai mis:
Terry Jones is 32 years old and he is single. He doesn't have children.
In five years ago, he worked in a shop in Pennsylvania but he didn't like his life, he was bored.
Now, he has been for world explorer because he has never liked his job, he will be more adventure and he has lived out his dreams.
Terry Jones has already been to Asia three times, to Africa and all over to Europe. He has discoveried a cultures, a lifestyles, people different of the continent.
Last year, he has been to North Pole. It was very hard but he has loved silence and a ice. He was with 8 dogs to the expeditions.
He would like to visit Australia.
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-06-2016 22:08
Réponse : Correction/Terry Jones de laure95, postée le 20-06-2016 à 18:14:30 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Terry Jones is 32 years old and he is single. He doesn't have (any)children.
In (pas de IN)five years ago, he worked in a shop in Pennsylvania but he didn't like his life, he was bored.
Now, he has been for world explorer
because he has never liked his job, he will be more adventure (ce n'est pas l'adjectif) and he has lived out his dreams.Terry Jones has already been to Asia three times, to Africa and all over to (enlever TO)Europe. He has discoveried (discovered) a (A +SINGULIER) cultures, a lifestyles, people different of the continent (mal dit).
Last year, he has been to North Pole (preterit). It was very hard but he has loved silence and a (the) ice. He was with 8 dogs to (during) the expeditions.
He would like to visit Australia.
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