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Message de dradra78 posté le 28-04-2016 à 18:00:06 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Je devais faire un petit texte sur le thème de l'espionnage et je ne suis pas sûr de ce que j'ai fait au niveau orthographe/grammaire, pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses!
It all started July 23, 2013, a day when life was good, a very hot day, very dry.
But it live was troubled by a crime that was perpetrated by a woman. A woman who killed her husband several stab wounds in the abdomen and heart. She was a good woman, trustworthy, we would have suspected that. When she realized he was dead, she had to quickly hide it. Fortunately for her it was night. But when you sow the wind, the storm is harvested.
The latter when she hid the body of her husband in his chest was touted as very often he seems his worst enemy, her ex-husband. Astonished at what had happened, he decided to follow her. The latter stopped near a forest where according to her, nobody would have found the body. No one.
But .. She knew she was spied. Her ex-husband stopped near his car and continued on foot. And the latter sees his ex-wife buried a body, he decided in a gesture of resentment, take the phone and take a picture of her burying the body.
He was so furious that he had his wife decided to blackmail. Each week, he sent him the pictures he took when burying the body. Her ex-husband watched every day, he even installed cameras at her to see her reactions, day and night he was watching. She was scared to death, whatever it does, it was blocked, it no longer out of her home, she ate nothing until she noticed her ex-husband and observe immediately, she the link between him and the pictures. She took a knife, sued her ex-husband and like her husband, she was buried next to him and so she became identified by police and imprisoned him for life in prison.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2016 20:31
Message de dradra78 posté le 28-04-2016 à 18:00:06 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Je devais faire un petit texte sur le thème de l'espionnage et je ne suis pas sûr de ce que j'ai fait au niveau orthographe/grammaire, pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses!
It all started July 23, 2013, a day when life was good, a very hot day, very dry.
But it live was troubled by a crime that was perpetrated by a woman. A woman who killed her husband several stab wounds in the abdomen and heart. She was a good woman, trustworthy, we would have suspected that. When she realized he was dead, she had to quickly hide it. Fortunately for her it was night. But when you sow the wind, the storm is harvested.
The latter when she hid the body of her husband in his chest was touted as very often he seems his worst enemy, her ex-husband. Astonished at what had happened, he decided to follow her. The latter stopped near a forest where according to her, nobody would have found the body. No one.
But .. She knew she was spied. Her ex-husband stopped near his car and continued on foot. And the latter sees his ex-wife buried a body, he decided in a gesture of resentment, take the phone and take a picture of her burying the body.
He was so furious that he had his wife decided to blackmail. Each week, he sent him the pictures he took when burying the body. Her ex-husband watched every day, he even installed cameras at her to see her reactions, day and night he was watching. She was scared to death, whatever it does, it was blocked, it no longer out of her home, she ate nothing until she noticed her ex-husband and observe immediately, she the link between him and the pictures. She took a knife, sued her ex-husband and like her husband, she was buried next to him and so she became identified by police and imprisoned him for life in prison.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2016 20:31
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