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Message de marco007 posté le 02-04-2016 à 15:54:52 (S | E | F)
Hello everyone !
Would you be so kind helping me with this letter ?
I'll appreciate your suggestions very much.
Merci d'avance!
Dear Mr X,
I'm sorry if this project has taken some delay due to the huge work we are facing since November due to an important fair.
Actually, as I wrote yesterday to Mr Y, we are looking for the best way for speeding up this project .Give us please one more week in order to analyze all the aspects and I'll return to you with a clear answer about the offer and the delivery time.
Please feel free to call me for any further information
Kind Regards
Marco
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-04-2016 15:58
Message de marco007 posté le 02-04-2016 à 15:54:52 (S | E | F)
Hello everyone !
Would you be so kind helping me with this letter ?
I'll appreciate your suggestions very much.
Merci d'avance!
Dear Mr X,
I'm sorry if this project has taken some delay due to the huge work we are facing since November due to an important fair.
Actually, as I wrote yesterday to Mr Y, we are looking for the best way for speeding up this project .Give us please one more week in order to analyze all the aspects and I'll return to you with a clear answer about the offer and the delivery time.
Please feel free to call me for any further information
Kind Regards
Marco
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-04-2016 15:58
Réponse: Lettre commerciale/aide de gerondif, postée le 03-04-2016 à 13:42:54 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
Dear Mr X,
I'm sorry if this project has taken some delay (has been somewhat delayed) due to the huge amount of work we
Actually, as I wrote yesterday to Mr Y, we are looking for the best way for speeding (to speed up)up this project .Give us please (Mettez please en premier) one more week in order to analyze all the aspects and I'll return to you with a clear answer about the offer and the delivery time.
Please feel free to call me for any further information
Kind regards (je mettrais autre chose en formule de salutation)
Réponse: Lettre commerciale/aide de marco007, postée le 03-04-2016 à 17:30:26 (S | E)
Thank you very much Gérondif for your help.
Do you think it's now better ?
Bonne fin de journée
Dear Mr X,
I'm sorry if this project has been somewhat delayed ( a été en quelque sorte retardé?) due to the huge amount of work we have been facing since November due to an important fair.
Actually, as I wrote Friday to Mr Y, we are looking for the best way to speed up this project . Please, give us one more week in order to analyze all the aspects and I'll return to you with a clear answer about the offer and the delivery time.
Please feel free to call me for any further information
My very best regards
Réponse: Lettre commerciale/aide de gerondif, postée le 03-04-2016 à 17:44:15 (S | E)
Bonjour
Tiens je pense à une autre formule:
Dear Mr X,
I'm sorry if this project has been somewhat delayed ( a été quelque peu retardé?)(I apologize for falling behind with this project) due to the huge amount of work we have been facing since November due to an important fair.
Actually (signifie en réalité), as I wrote Friday to Mr Y, we are looking for the best way to speed up this project . (After writing on Friday to Mr Y, we are now looking for.....) Please, give us one more week in order to analyze all the aspects and I'll return to you with a clear answer about the offer and the delivery time.
Please feel free to call me for any further information
My very best regards
Réponse: Lettre commerciale/aide de marco007, postée le 03-04-2016 à 22:51:30 (S | E)
Merci encore pour cette aide précieuse!
Marco
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