Thème/ Shakira
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Message de hanae1518 posté le 30-01-2016 à 15:31:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je suis nouvelle ici,
Si je me permets de poser ce thème. C'est tout simplement que j'ai besoin de votre aide au plus vite car la semaine prochaine j'ai mon oral de Bac blanc et j'ai besoin que quelqu'un me corrige mon thème s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I am going to talk about Shakira. Which is a singer, she was born under the name of Shakira Isabell Mebarak Ripoll. She was born on February 2nd 1977 in Barranquilla. She's a Colombian autor,compositor and interpret. Her parents were Colombian, She got 6 brothers. She is in a with the Spanish soccer player Gérard piqué. She got 2 children, Millan Piqué Mebarak and Sasha Piqué Mebarak.
After having émergent on the latin American scene by occurring ont the 1990.
She knows an international success from 2002 for thé title whenerver, whenerver. Famous for her songs mixing South Américan pop and music of the World, She is also known for her dancer's talents (oriental dance, merengue, tango).
Message de hanae1518 posté le 30-01-2016 à 15:31:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je suis nouvelle ici,
Si je me permets de poser ce thème. C'est tout simplement que j'ai besoin de votre aide au plus vite car la semaine prochaine j'ai mon oral de Bac blanc et j'ai besoin que quelqu'un me corrige mon thème s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I am going to talk about Shakira. Which is a singer, she was born under the name of Shakira Isabell Mebarak Ripoll. She was born on February 2nd 1977 in Barranquilla. She's a Colombian autor,compositor and interpret. Her parents were Colombian, She got 6 brothers. She is in a with the Spanish soccer player Gérard piqué. She got 2 children, Millan Piqué Mebarak and Sasha Piqué Mebarak.
After having émergent on the latin American scene by occurring ont the 1990.
She knows an international success from 2002 for thé title whenerver, whenerver. Famous for her songs mixing South Américan pop and music of the World, She is also known for her dancer's talents (oriental dance, merengue, tango).
Réponse: Thème/ Shakira de gerondif, postée le 30-01-2016 à 17:31:04 (S | E)
Bonjour;
Vous avez dû faire ça au traducteur parce que certaines phrases n'ont pas de sens et les mots français mal orthographiés restent tels quels.
erreurs en bleu corrections en vert
I am going to talk about Shakira Which(derrière un objet) is a singer, she was born under the name of Shakira Isabell Mebarak Ripoll. She was born on February 2nd 1977 in Barranquilla. She's a Colombian autor,compositor and interpret. Her parents were Colombian, She has got 6 brothers. She is
After having émergent on the latin American scene by occurring ont the 1990.(la phrase n'a pas de sens)
She knows(il vaudrait mieux un present perfect avec un depuis) an international success from 2002 for thé title whenerver, whenerver. Famous for her songs mixing South Américan pop and music of the World, She is also known for her dancer's talents (oriental dance, merengue, tango).
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