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Message de snow369 posté le 10-12-2015 à 15:37:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous;
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait à corriger mon texte?
Can you please help me to correct my text?
Merci d'avance.
Advantages and disadvantages of Facebook
facebook is the most used website in the world. Millions of people use it evry day so they can chat with their friend, besides they can know the news easly and freely in addition it's a wonderfull website to make new friend all over the world
but facebook is also a very dangerous website beacause it use traking cookies which now all you do on the enternet as your passwords, your emails, even the other website you surf in addition some facebook user become addicted so they think only about likes and shares and they forgot their homework and to have real friends
i think that facebook is a dooble-edged sword whish we must be carefull when using it
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-12-2015 16:12
Message de snow369 posté le 10-12-2015 à 15:37:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous;
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait à corriger mon texte?
Can you please help me to correct my text?
Merci d'avance.
Advantages and disadvantages of Facebook
facebook is the most used website in the world. Millions of people use it evry day so they can chat with their friend, besides they can know the news easly and freely in addition it's a wonderfull website to make new friend all over the world
but facebook is also a very dangerous website beacause it use traking cookies which now all you do on the enternet as your passwords, your emails, even the other website you surf in addition some facebook user become addicted so they think only about likes and shares and they forgot their homework and to have real friends
i think that facebook is a dooble-edged sword whish we must be carefull when using it
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-12-2015 16:12
Réponse: Correction/Facebook de gerondif, postée le 12-12-2015 à 14:17:48 (S | E)
Hello,
attention à vos pluriels! erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert.
Advantages and disadvantages of Facebook
facebook is the most used website in the world. Millions of people use it every day so they can chat with their friend(pluriel), besides they can know(on ne "connait" pas les informations, on les apprend, on en entend parler the news easily and freely in addition it's a wonderfull website to make new friend(pluriel) all over the world.
but facebook is also a very dangerous website beacause it use (le s du présent simple) traking cookies which now(orthographe du verbe savoir) all you do on the enternet as your passwords, your emails, even the other website(pluriel) you surf in addition some facebook user(pluriel) become addicted so they think only about likes and shares and they forgot (présent simple, pas prétérit) their homework and to have real friends
i(majuscule) think that facebook is a dooble-edged sword whish we must be carefull when using it (la construction irait s'il n'y avait pas which, il faut dire ...que nous devons utiliser prudemment)
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