Gap Year/ project
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Message de black2463 posté le 08-12-2015 à 14:09:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis nouveau sur le site et je poste pour vous demander votre aide ! j'ai effectué une expression écrite dans laquelle j'explique quel genre de Gap Year j'aimerais faire et pourquoi. Donc j'aimerais vraiment que vous m'aidiez pour mes fautes et mes erreurs de styleainsi que et avoir votre avis !
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Hello,
My name is... , and i'm actually in my second year of Biologie studies and more precisely in BCP : Biologie cells, physiologie at UBP in Clermont Ferrand.
In my future career i would like to work in the sports nutrition. I'm someone who loves sports and it's values.
I would like to take a gap year in Oregon USA precisely in Portland, for one year. If I can I will take it at the begining of the next year. The way of life of USA attract me, and more over, the 2016 world championship indoor will be right there in mars so I want to be there ! Nowadays the english language is very importante to find work so i will enjoy this trip to improve my knowledges and my linguiste skills.
I have already worked in France to save money to ensure my transports and my many activities. During my Gap year i will stay for a large part in portland, my cousins is leaving over there for his studies so i will live at his home for a while, to travel i will rent a car. It will be the more expansive thing of my trip i think, but i have expected the cost of the adventure of an average between 3000 and 4000 dollars.
First Oregon have one of the best track and fields championship of the USA, because of the many greats athletes comming from their university. I love competition, confront them will be a dream for a guy like me. So my first goal will be to get into a club of athletics and achieve a track and fields season. By the way i would like to learn the sport's spirit of this country, clearly the fervour of this country for this sports is at another level over there, compared to France. Most of all i want to learn how they practice how they run, simply their way of life.
I think this gap year would be great for me.J'en reviendrai grandis dans ma facon de vivre ou ma facon...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-12-2015 14:25
Nous indiquons les fautes, nous ne traduisons pas à votre place
Message de black2463 posté le 08-12-2015 à 14:09:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis nouveau sur le site et je poste pour vous demander votre aide ! j'ai effectué une expression écrite dans laquelle j'explique quel genre de Gap Year j'aimerais faire et pourquoi. Donc j'aimerais vraiment que vous m'aidiez pour mes fautes et mes erreurs de style
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Hello,
My name is... , and i'm actually in my second year of Biologie studies and more precisely in BCP : Biologie cells, physiologie at UBP in Clermont Ferrand.
In my future career i would like to work in the sports nutrition. I'm someone who loves sports and it's values.
I would like to take a gap year in Oregon USA precisely in Portland, for one year. If I can I will take it at the begining of the next year. The way of life of USA attract me, and more over, the 2016 world championship indoor will be right there in mars so I want to be there ! Nowadays the english language is very importante to find work so i will enjoy this trip to improve my knowledges and my linguiste skills.
I have already worked in France to save money to ensure my transports and my many activities. During my Gap year i will stay for a large part in portland, my cousins is leaving over there for his studies so i will live at his home for a while, to travel i will rent a car. It will be the more expansive thing of my trip i think, but i have expected the cost of the adventure of an average between 3000 and 4000 dollars.
First Oregon have one of the best track and fields championship of the USA, because of the many greats athletes comming from their university. I love competition, confront them will be a dream for a guy like me. So my first goal will be to get into a club of athletics and achieve a track and fields season. By the way i would like to learn the sport's spirit of this country, clearly the fervour of this country for this sports is at another level over there, compared to France. Most of all i want to learn how they practice how they run, simply their way of life.
I think this gap year would be great for me.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-12-2015 14:25
Nous indiquons les fautes, nous ne traduisons pas à votre place
Réponse: Gap Year/ project de laure95, postée le 10-12-2015 à 13:40:50 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- Biologie, physiologie: à traduire.
- it's values: tu confonds IT'S et ITS.
- The way of life of USA attract me: conjugaison + article devant USA.
-the English: majuscule.
- importante: orthographe.
- my many: mal dit.
- portland: majuscule.
-my cousins is leaving: sujet au pluriel + verbe au pluriel.
-It will be the more expansive thing of my trip: utiliser le superlatif.
- First Oregon have: verbe au singulier.
- their university: utiliser un possessif au singulier.
- this sports: THIS + MOT AU SINGULIER.
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