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Message de cindy007 posté le 03-10-2015 à 16:48:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde!
Je dois envoyer un e-mail en anglais mais je ne sais pas si tout est correct...
Pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger, s'il vous plait ? ;-) Merci pour vos réponses.
This is my e-mail:
Dear Sir
My name is Cindy V. I am 17 years old and I come from Belgium.
Next year, I would like to study at a High School in Halifax to learn English. I do athletics in high level, I am the Belgian champion for the 200m . I participated twice at the Memorial Van Damme for the 100m and 4X100m. I also go abroad: this summer I went to Mannheim for a international competition and in July, I took part in the European Championship in Zweden for the 4X100m. I belong to the national team.
So this is why I want to continue my sport when I go to Nova Scotia. I do athletics 5 times a week in Brussels , in the Roi Baudouin Stadion.
I began athletics when I was 8. I run the 100 and 200 meters and my performances are 12.08 and 24.80.
I did some research and I am very interested in your Track club.
But I would like to have more information about the training schedule and the course of training.
Yours,
Cindy V.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-10-2015 17:46
Message de cindy007 posté le 03-10-2015 à 16:48:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde!
Je dois envoyer un e-mail en anglais mais je ne sais pas si tout est correct...
Pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger, s'il vous plait ? ;-) Merci pour vos réponses.
This is my e-mail:
Dear Sir
My name is Cindy V. I am 17 years old and I come from Belgium.
Next year, I would like to study at a High School in Halifax to learn English. I do athletics in high level, I am the Belgian champion for the 200m . I participated twice at the Memorial Van Damme for the 100m and 4X100m. I also go abroad: this summer I went to Mannheim for a international competition and in July, I took part in the European Championship in Zweden for the 4X100m. I belong to the national team.
So this is why I want to continue my sport when I go to Nova Scotia. I do athletics 5 times a week in Brussels , in the Roi Baudouin Stadion.
I began athletics when I was 8. I run the 100 and 200 meters and my performances are 12.08 and 24.80.
I did some research and I am very interested in your Track club.
But I would like to have more information about the training schedule and the course of training.
Yours,
Cindy V.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-10-2015 17:46
Réponse: Aide/ e-mail de gerondif, postée le 05-10-2015 à 23:21:28 (S | E)
Bonjour,
quelques erreurs....
Dear Sir
My name is Cindy V. I am 17 years old and I come from Belgium.
Next year, I would like to study at a High School in Halifax to learn English. I do athletics in(at a) high level, I am the Belgian champion for the 200m . I participated twice at(to) the Memorial Van Damme for the 100m and 4X100m. I also go abroad: this summer I went to Mannheim for an international competition and in July, I took part in the European Championship in Zweden for the 4X100m. I belong to the national team.
So this is why I want to continue my sport when I go to Nova Scotia. I do athletics 5 times a week in Brussels , in the Roi Baudouin Stadion.
I began athletics when I was 8. I run the 100 and 200 meters and my performances are 12.08 and 24.80.
I did some research and I am very interested in your Track club.
(maladroit de commencer une phrase par "but", mettez "cependant,")But I would like to have more information about the training schedule and the course of training.
La fin de lettre est un peu sèche, une formule de fin de lettre serait bien.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy V.
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