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Message de jaun posté le 03-05-2015 à 13:00:01 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes dans la lettre ci-dessous. Merci de votre aide.
B.R.
The editor
14 Tothill St
London SW5J, United Kingdom
Dear Madam,
Having read your opinion about screens, I owe defend the IT community. For it several reasons will be expressed in the letter. Know that 3,025 billion human beings use Internet that is 42 % of the world population. You think you can stop the technology? The immediate information, the digital communication, the varied entertainments, a tool of calculation, the possibilities are infinite.
First of all, the immediate information allows a constant current event, always know. The communication is different, but faster, more fluid, more effective. And especially the freedom to learn and to become enlightened. It creates a new shape of business. We speak more and more often about the remote work, the distance training, about medical remote consultations, so many made novelties possible thanks to the web. It strengthens the freedom of expression. We saw the important role played by the web in the Arabic revolutions against the tyrannical regimes of certain countries.
It is true that Internet can turn out bad, it can become an addiction and prevent the dependent person from developing real relations by imprisoning it into virtual relations, and it can kill healthy practices as the reading. If it is badly used, he can damage the studies of the pupils. It can be used by bad people who try to swindle, to deceive, to steal other people. The children, in particular, are easy potential victims who have to use the internet under the supervision of the adults. It is also bad for eyes. Sadly, there is a long list …
You will have understood, I am for Internet, because it is the tool which is going to become an essential object for all, we can all make with, the future it is the computing! You are right to have written your extract, but is it very useful?
Yours faithfully.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2015 14:39
Message de jaun posté le 03-05-2015 à 13:00:01 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes dans la lettre ci-dessous. Merci de votre aide.
B.R.
The editor
14 Tothill St
London SW5J, United Kingdom
Dear Madam,
Having read your opinion about screens, I owe defend the IT community. For it several reasons will be expressed in the letter. Know that 3,025 billion human beings use Internet that is 42 % of the world population. You think you can stop the technology? The immediate information, the digital communication, the varied entertainments, a tool of calculation, the possibilities are infinite.
First of all, the immediate information allows a constant current event, always know. The communication is different, but faster, more fluid, more effective. And especially the freedom to learn and to become enlightened. It creates a new shape of business. We speak more and more often about the remote work, the distance training, about medical remote consultations, so many made novelties possible thanks to the web. It strengthens the freedom of expression. We saw the important role played by the web in the Arabic revolutions against the tyrannical regimes of certain countries.
It is true that Internet can turn out bad, it can become an addiction and prevent the dependent person from developing real relations by imprisoning it into virtual relations, and it can kill healthy practices as the reading. If it is badly used, he can damage the studies of the pupils. It can be used by bad people who try to swindle, to deceive, to steal other people. The children, in particular, are easy potential victims who have to use the internet under the supervision of the adults. It is also bad for eyes. Sadly, there is a long list …
You will have understood, I am for Internet, because it is the tool which is going to become an essential object for all, we can all make with, the future it is the computing! You are right to have written your extract, but is it very useful?
Yours faithfully.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2015 14:39
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