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Message de marie1010 posté le 30-04-2015 à 11:56:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
il me reste une dernière notion à corriger. Si quelqu’un pouvait m'aider ce serait gentil.
Merci pour vos réponses.
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we see that they become heroes by their act and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , most players become heroes through competition they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby player who told us their stories , for example, Luke Hamilton, a 22- year-old, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen
We also view a document on Cathy Freeman, Aboriginal athlete is an Olympic champion , she won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame This choice means that the Australian government wants to reconcile descendants of European emigration and aborigines
We study an example of hero became a myth like Nelson Mandela, the first he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who died in 1995, he became the symbol of a youth disturbed through first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he gets loved motor sports which will cost him his life in 1995 on Route 66 , it is persecuted with full force, then it becomes a myth and left their names in the pantheon in American cinema. However, it will gain twice the Oscar for best actor
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous , you only do it for courageous action to achieve this status
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-04-2015 12:01
Message de marie1010 posté le 30-04-2015 à 11:56:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
il me reste une dernière notion à corriger. Si quelqu’un pouvait m'aider ce serait gentil.
Merci pour vos réponses.
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we see that they become heroes by their act and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , most players become heroes through competition they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby player who told us their stories , for example, Luke Hamilton, a 22- year-old, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen
We also view a document on Cathy Freeman, Aboriginal athlete is an Olympic champion , she won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame This choice means that the Australian government wants to reconcile descendants of European emigration and aborigines
We study an example of hero became a myth like Nelson Mandela, the first he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who died in 1995, he became the symbol of a youth disturbed through first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he gets loved motor sports which will cost him his life in 1995 on Route 66 , it is persecuted with full force, then it becomes a myth and left their names in the pantheon in American cinema. However, it will gain twice the Oscar for best actor
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous , you only do it for courageous action to achieve this status
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-04-2015 12:01
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de here4u, postée le 30-04-2015 à 13:08:35 (S | E)
Hello !
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we can see that they become heroes by their act and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , most players(???) become heroes through XXX competitionS they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby player who told us their stories , for example, Luke Hamilton, a 22- year-old, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen
We also view a document on Cathy Freeman, XX Aboriginal athlete is an Olympic champion(watch the construction) , she won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame This choice means that the Australian government wants to reconcile XXX descendants of European emigration and aAborigines
We study an example of hero became a myth like Nelson Mandela, the first he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who died in 1995, he became the symbol of a youth disturbed through XXX first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he gets loved motor sports which will cost him his life in 1995 on Route 66 , it is persecuted with full force,(What is?) then it becomes a myth and left their names
in the pantheon in American cinema. However, it will gain twice the Oscar for best actor(word order)Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous, you only do it(???) for courageous action to achieve this status not clear at all ...
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de marie1010, postée le 30-04-2015 à 16:31:28 (S | E)
Bonjour, j'aurais voulu savoir ce que vous n'avez pas compris car il y a souvent des " ??" Et ce que signifient les XXX partout dans le texte ?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-04-2015 16:36
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de lucile83, postée le 30-04-2015 à 16:42:03 (S | E)
Hello,
Les ??? signifient que votre phrase ne peut pas être comprise.
Exemple: you only do it??? for courageous action ...'it' c'est quoi? de quoi parlez-vous?
Les xxx = il manque un mot ou deux...
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de marie1010, postée le 30-04-2015 à 18:36:44 (S | E)
Merci
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de marie1010, postée le 30-04-2015 à 18:53:18 (S | E)
J'ai pu modifier grâce à vos corrections, j'espère que c'est plus compréhensible.
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we can see that they become heroes by their act and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , mostly players (la plupart des joueurs) become heroes through the competitions they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby player who told us their stories (ont racontés leur histoire), for example, Luke Hamilton, a 22- year-old, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen
We also view a document on Cathy Freeman, the Aboriginal athlete is an Olympic champion( est une championne olympic) , she won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame This choice means that the Australian government wants to reconcile the descendants of European emigration and aAborigines
We study an example of hero became a myth like Nelson Mandela, the first he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who died in 1995, he became the symbol of a youth disturbed through the first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he gets loved motor sports which will cost him his life in 1995 on Route 66 , it is persecuted with full force ( il se fait persécuté de plein foue)( qui ? James dean) then it becomes a myth and left their names in the pantheon in American cinema. However, it will gain twice the Oscar for actor best.
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous, you only do it for courageous action to achieve this status
La dernière phrase signifie « il suffit qu'il fasse des actions courageuse pour obtenir ce statut »
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 30-04-2015 à 23:51:35 (S | E)
Hello,
il y a encore du travail!!
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we can see that they become heroes by their act(pluriel du mot action) and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , mostly players (mostly est l'adverbe formé sur most, la plupart de)) become heroes through the competitions they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby player who told us their stories (Bon alors là, pour qu'ils racontent LEURS histoires, il faut que les rugby players soient au pluriel!!), for example, Luke Hamilton, a 22- year-old man, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen. (ce qui n'apporte rien à votre histoire
)We also view(au prétérit) a document on Cathy Freeman, the Aboriginal athlete (manque le pronom relatif qui)is an Olympic champion.(Mettez des points, qui signifient que vous vous arrêtez, intonation descendante et que vous reprenez votre souffle , ce qui permet aussi à l'examinateur de digérer ce qu'il vient d'entendre ou de subir) she won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame. This choice means that the Australian government wants to reconcile the descendants of European emigration and the Aborigines
We study(prétérit) an example of hero became (participe passé) a myth like Nelson Mandela.(point!)
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who died in 1995(bon d'accord, vous n'étiez pas née mais 1995, ce n'est pas la préhistoire, James Dean est mort en 1955!!), he became the symbol of a youth disturbed(inversez) through the first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous, he has to do courageous actions to achieve this status .( assez maladroite cette dernière phrase, partir du français et vouloir à tout prix dire ça peut s'avérer maladroit)
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de marie1010, postée le 01-05-2015 à 11:48:51 (S | E)
Bon voila j'espère que c'est mieux
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we can see that they become heroes by their acts and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , mostly players become heroes through the competitions they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby players who told us their stories , for example, Luke Hamilton, 22- year-old man, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen.
We also view a document on Cathy Freeman, the Aboriginal athlete who is an Olympic champion. Sshe won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame. This choice means that the Australian government wants to reconcile the descendants of European emigration and the Aborigines
We studied an example of hero become a myth like Nelson Mandela. First he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994.
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who dead in 1995, he became the symbol of a disturbed youth through the first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he loved motor sports which will cost him his life in 1995 on Route 66 ,his car crashed another car who bifurcated, then it, became a myth and left their( oui son nom) names in the pantheon in American cinema. However,it(oui l'acteur) will gain twice the Oscar for actor best.
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous, he has to do courageous action to achieve this status
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 01-05-2015 à 12:53:39 (S | E)
Bonjour,
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we can see that they become heroes by their actions and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , mostly(virez ly!!) players become heroes through the competitions they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby players who told us their stories , for example, Luke Hamilton, 22- year-old man, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen.
We also view(prétérit en ed) a document on Cathy Freeman, the Aboriginal athlete who is an Olympic champion. She won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame. This choice means that the Australian government wants(prétérit en ed) to reconcile the descendants of European emigration and the Aborigines
We studied an example of hero become a myth like Nelson Mandela. First he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994.
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who dead(un oubli, mettez le verbe die au prétérit, dead est un adjectif d'état, comme pour le bois du dossier de ma chaise qui est mort, inerte, alors que die est un verbe d'action, le dernière hélas, trépasser,décéder...) in 1995(je n'ai pas dû être clair c'est 1955, et comme tous les gens morts jeunes , il reste jeune à jamais dans l'esprit des gens), he became the symbol of a disturbed youth through the first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he loved motor sports which
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous, he has to do courageous actions to achieve this status.
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de marie1010, postée le 01-05-2015 à 13:24:42 (S | E)
J'espère que c'est bon cette fois-ci.
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we can see that they become heroes by their actions and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , most players become heroes through the competitions they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby players who told us their stories , for example, Luke Hamilton, 22- year-old man, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen.
We also viewed a document on Cathy Freeman, the Aboriginal athlete who is an Olympic champion. She won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame. This choice means that the Australian government wanted to reconcile the descendants of European emigration and the Aborigines
We studied an example of hero become a myth like Nelson Mandela. First he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994.
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who dead in 1955, he became the symbol of a disturbed youth through the first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he loved motor sports which cost him his life in 1955 on Route 66 ,his car crashed into another car then he, became a myth and left his names in the pantheon in American cinema. However,he will gain twice the Oscar for best actor .
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous, he has to do courageous actions to achieve this status.
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 01-05-2015 à 14:57:45 (S | E)
Hello,
How can heroes become myths ?
One the one hand we can see that they become heroes by their actions and then they become myths after death
In the documents reviewed , most players become heroes through the competitions they win or donations they make. We met the English rugby players who told us their stories , for example, Luke Hamilton, 22- year-old man, started rugby at Cardiff then he successfully integrated the SUA in Agen.
We also viewed a document on Cathy Freeman, the Aboriginal athlete who is an Olympic champion. She won the world championships in 1997 and 1999. She was chosen to light the Olympic flame. This choice means that the Australian government wanted to reconcile the descendants of European emigration and the Aborigines
We studied an example of hero become a myth like Nelson Mandela. First he was a hero for his actions, he was against racial segregation and against the laws of apartheid. Since his imprisonment in 1962 he became a symbol of the struggle for racial equality. He won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1993 and then became the first black president of South Africa in 1994.
Another document was about James Dean , an American actor who dead(oubli de ma part, voyez ma correction d'avant sur die et dead) in 1955, he became the symbol of a disturbed youth through the first role in the movie " Rebel Without a Cause ." In this film he loved motor sports which cost him his life in 1955 on Route 66 ,his car crashed into another car then he,(virgule mal placée) became a myth and left his names in the pantheon in the American cinema. However,he will gain the Oscar twice for best actor .
Finally, a hero can become a myth, but it's not always the case. A hero is not necessarily famous, he has to do courageous actions to achieve this status.
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de marie1010, postée le 01-05-2015 à 16:15:49 (S | E)
Donc c'est bien died ? Ce que j'avais mis en premier
Merci.
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de emirane, postée le 01-05-2015 à 19:38:46 (S | E)
Bonjour ! Juste pour dire que c'est "ON the one hand" et non pas "ONE the one hand". Bonne journée
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de gerondif, postée le 01-05-2015 à 19:41:28 (S | E)
Hello,
Exact, on the one hand... on the other hand, mon oeil doit la corriger sans la voir, celle-ci....
et c'était bien died!!
Réponse: Bac/Mythes et héros de here4u, postée le 02-05-2015 à 08:47:33 (S | E)
Hello gerondif!
Thanks for going on correcting ( with humour, patience and perseverance as usual) what I had started... I was busy getting drenched selling lily of the valley for an NGO I'm not allowed to promote, and getting a cold ...
Thanks for James Dean too! ( My brain had read faster than my eye... ) Have a great weekend! 
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