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Message de missliloo posté le 28-04-2015 à 17:48:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je voudrais vous demander si vous pouviez relire mon devoir d'anglais dans le but de corriger d'éventuelles fautes...
Merci par avance !
Expression Subject :
Would you like to live in the countryside or would you prefer to live in a town ? Explain Why.
Today, much of people make the choice of living downtown or in the countryside. In this respect, which mediums of life could seem more favourable compared to the other? To answer this question, we will have the advantages and objections of the city. Then we will also study the advantages and disadvantages of the countryside. To conclude, we will compare these two very different mediums of lives. To live downtown present much of advantages. One can leave easily thanks to transport in command runs. The city proposes also much place of relaxation and leisure such as for example the cinemas; gyms or shopping centres. But with the reflection, one can as notice as all its infrastructures do not have only advantages. It can appear difficult to find places calm where to insulate itself downtown because there are many people in the streets; in the stores like in the parks public in the centre town. Moreover, the city accommodates a large number of roads this is why much space are polluted. to live in the countryside present also a certain number of advantages. When one lives in the countryside, one can more easily live slackened thanks to the calm atmosphere and putting back campaign. However, campaign calms it has a price. The countryside is distant from city consequently, the centers of leisure and relaxations as well as the stores are far and it is almost necessary to take the car for each way because there is no transport in command runs. for the people of distant nature and calms the countryside is an ideal place. However, for the more active people and having needs to reach easily certain infrastructures suggested downtown, to live there is perhaps better. Within sight of my character and of all the activities which I practise, food east downtown for me a need.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2015 19:49
Message de missliloo posté le 28-04-2015 à 17:48:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je voudrais vous demander si vous pouviez relire mon devoir d'anglais dans le but de corriger d'éventuelles fautes...
Merci par avance !
Expression Subject :
Would you like to live in the countryside or would you prefer to live in a town ? Explain Why.
Today, much of people make the choice of living downtown or in the countryside. In this respect, which mediums of life could seem more favourable compared to the other? To answer this question, we will have the advantages and objections of the city. Then we will also study the advantages and disadvantages of the countryside. To conclude, we will compare these two very different mediums of lives. To live downtown present much of advantages. One can leave easily thanks to transport in command runs. The city proposes also much place of relaxation and leisure such as for example the cinemas; gyms or shopping centres. But with the reflection, one can as notice as all its infrastructures do not have only advantages. It can appear difficult to find places calm where to insulate itself downtown because there are many people in the streets; in the stores like in the parks public in the centre town. Moreover, the city accommodates a large number of roads this is why much space are polluted. to live in the countryside present also a certain number of advantages. When one lives in the countryside, one can more easily live slackened thanks to the calm atmosphere and putting back campaign. However, campaign calms it has a price. The countryside is distant from city consequently, the centers of leisure and relaxations as well as the stores are far and it is almost necessary to take the car for each way because there is no transport in command runs. for the people of distant nature and calms the countryside is an ideal place. However, for the more active people and having needs to reach easily certain infrastructures suggested downtown, to live there is perhaps better. Within sight of my character and of all the activities which I practise, food east downtown for me a need.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2015 19:49
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