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Message de azanne posté le 09-04-2015 à 15:48:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pour compléter mon dossiers de licence pro je dois répondre a cette question en anglais.
"02. Describe examples of professionnal experience in working environment." j’aurais aimé savoir si vous pouviez m'aider à corriger certaines fautes et tournures de phrases .
Merci pour vos réponses.
Voilà mon texte:
Has a receptionist, I had to follow a procedure. First of all, if I was on a morning shift, I was counting the cash flow and make sure that it was the same has the last night shift. Then I was in charge of integrating the various spending of the previous day (restaurant, bar) for each room in their final bill, before their departure by using software protel. After the departure of the customer, I had to prepare arrivals. Classifying each name buy order and prepare the room keys. The rest of the day, I was taking reservation on the phone or by mail, making sure to check if we had viabilities or not. The late shift was pretty much the same. Overhall it was a really nice experience, I manage to improve my English and I discover different culture.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-04-2015 15:53
Message de azanne posté le 09-04-2015 à 15:48:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pour compléter mon dossiers de licence pro je dois répondre a cette question en anglais.
"02. Describe examples of professionnal experience in working environment." j’aurais aimé savoir si vous pouviez m'aider à corriger certaines fautes et tournures de phrases .
Merci pour vos réponses.
Voilà mon texte:
Has a receptionist, I had to follow a procedure. First of all, if I was on a morning shift, I was counting the cash flow and make sure that it was the same has the last night shift. Then I was in charge of integrating the various spending of the previous day (restaurant, bar) for each room in their final bill, before their departure by using software protel. After the departure of the customer, I had to prepare arrivals. Classifying each name buy order and prepare the room keys. The rest of the day, I was taking reservation on the phone or by mail, making sure to check if we had viabilities or not. The late shift was pretty much the same. Overhall it was a really nice experience, I manage to improve my English and I discover different culture.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-04-2015 15:53
Réponse: Dossier /Licence pro de azanne, postée le 13-04-2015 à 13:38:44 (S | E)
Personne?
Réponse: Dossier /Licence pro de bluduck2, postée le 14-04-2015 à 12:43:16 (S | E)
Hello azanne !
Voici quelques fautes à corriger
ligne 1 : As (pour dire en tant que ) n'est pas le verbe "avoir"
ligne 2 précisez:the customers'final bill
ligne 3 "buy" est le verbe acheter .Vous voulez dire "by" .Cherchez une expression pour "par ordre (alphabatétique /ou autre)
ligne 4 revoyez l' orthographe de "overall"
conjuguez "manage" et "discover" au simple past.
I hope this helps! Bluduck2
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