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Message de mimi653 posté le 06-04-2015 à 11:38:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Ayant une critique de film a faire sur le film Argo je me demande si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger mes fautes et me donner son avis xxx,càd me c'est-à-dire dire s'il est intéressant à lire.
Merci pour vos réponses !
To my mind I think that Argo is a successful feature film. In the first place the original history is very well restore. Some aspect are very realist. The seventies are very respected. We’ll believe that we are in the past with the cars, the costume… the details are very convincing. Furthermore the role are well interpret. Indeed the characters arn’t very-well-known actors so it plays a part as well. We become attached to the American hostages throughout history.
After about the plot there is many twists and turns. That’s why Argo is very enthralling in my opinion. We can say that’s a combination of irony and suspense. The end is simply incredible. There is the tension of a spy film but kind of funny American film
The film is well thought out and worked. He centres us on this serious crisis. We think but we laugh all the same.
Little disappointment the action of the film is slow to begin. But above all Iraqis appeared like a threatening crowd, a fanatical riot.
To finish there is a highlighted of the CIA scheming. For the “good cause” Not very just.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-04-2015 11:43
Message de mimi653 posté le 06-04-2015 à 11:38:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Ayant une critique de film a faire sur le film Argo je me demande si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger mes fautes et me donner son avis xxx,
Merci pour vos réponses !
To my mind I think that Argo is a successful feature film. In the first place the original history is very well restore. Some aspect are very realist. The seventies are very respected. We’ll believe that we are in the past with the cars, the costume… the details are very convincing. Furthermore the role are well interpret. Indeed the characters arn’t very-well-known actors so it plays a part as well. We become attached to the American hostages throughout history.
After about the plot there is many twists and turns. That’s why Argo is very enthralling in my opinion. We can say that’s a combination of irony and suspense. The end is simply incredible. There is the tension of a spy film but kind of funny American film
The film is well thought out and worked. He centres us on this serious crisis. We think but we laugh all the same.
Little disappointment the action of the film is slow to begin. But above all Iraqis appeared like a threatening crowd, a fanatical riot.
To finish there is a highlighted of the CIA scheming. For the “good cause” Not very just.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-04-2015 11:43
Réponse: Critique film/aide de bluduck2, postée le 11-04-2015 à 18:55:03 (S | E)
Hello mimi653 ! Quelques remarques
--revoir les participes passés (restaurés/interprétés
--rechercher l'adjectif "réaliste"
ligne 1 :préciser ce qui est propre aux seventies (atmosphere ? contexte ?)
ligne 2 :pourquoi un futur ?
ligne 3 :s'agit-il de l'Histoire (History) ou de l'intrigue du film (the story, the plot)?
ligne 4 :pourquoi "After" en début de phrase ?
ligne 4 :"many" implique verbe "être" au pluriel
ligne 5 :éviter "kind of"
ligne 6 :"film" est neutre ligne 6 :chercher le verbe "centrer"
ligne 7 :corriger le temps du verbe "to appear"
ligne 7 :vérifier si "riot" (=émeute) convient ici .
ligne 8 :après "highlighted,il faudrait un nom
ligne 8 : "just" ?voulez-vous dire "fair"? ou "true to life" ou "accurate"?
Une fois les fautes corrigées et en ajoutant quelques détails précis sur le film et l'intrigue, votre paragraphe sera intéressant .
I hope this helps! Bluduck2
Réponse: Critique film/aide de bluestar, postée le 12-04-2015 à 00:22:11 (S | E)
Hello..
Iranians not Iraqis.
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