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Message de glassysky posté le 03-04-2015 à 23:13:56 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous,
ayant un exposé en anglais la semaine prochaine, je me demandais si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger les fautes de mon texte. Cela m'aiderait beaucoup étant donné que mon niveau en anglais est pour l'instant pas très glorieux. Je vous remercie d'avance.
Le texte :
So, today i'm going to talk about Tokyo Ghoul. This is a manga and anime made by Sui Ishida. The manga were created in 2010 and the anime in 2014. The story happens in a Japan contaminate by the Ghouls. Ghouls are creatures cannibals, so they eat the humans. This is her only one way for survives. Two kinds of Ghouls exists : The good and the bad.
The main character is Kaneki Ken and the anime turn around him. This is a young boy who likes the japanese litterature. He is very lonely and study to letter unniversity. Her nature is calm, he is shy and a little more kind. This is got him into her ruin. At the beggining of anime, he have a black hair but further to trauma, her hair by fear, bleached. He is in love with Lize, and lize will change his life.
Lize is a young woman who have a normal physic, but in reality she is a ghoul obssesed by boys. She tries to kill and eat Kaneki but she dies. And kaneki, wounded, receive her monster organs. So he become half human, half ghoul.
Hide is the best friend of Kaneki. This is her only one friend and they meet each other when they were young. He is very cool, joyful and sociable. The opposite of Kaneki. He is secretely well up for Kaneki new nature but, he never judge him. He is tries to make everything for help him. This is a really good guy.
Toka is a strong ghoul. Despite her punchs and insults, she rest a gentle girl. She will help Kaneki and with the time, she fall in love with him. She works in Antique where the kind ghoule lives. She hates to be considerate like monster, because she eats only died human.
Yoshiura is the boss of coffe "Antique". He is very calm and he will help Kaneki to accept helself. He will take on him in this coffe. We learnt about her real indentity after in the story..
Amon Kotaro is a policeman very brave. He is to fight, with this team, against the ghoules considerated like monster. he is wise and he will cherish a special relation with Kaneki.
I like this manga because he talks about a sujet very interessant. Even if the ghouls are cannibals, they can have a human felling. He makes our to reflect into the world. A human can be a monster and a monster can be a human. This is not our own nature, our own body, but the inside of us who makes who we are. Then the loves feellings are not very present, this is pleasent. I have don't read all of the manga but the anime is very good. The design is beautiful and the songs originals. This is certainly one of my favorite anime. The charactes are lovely and.. And this is all, aha.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-04-2015 23:23
Message de glassysky posté le 03-04-2015 à 23:13:56 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous,
ayant un exposé en anglais la semaine prochaine, je me demandais si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à corriger les fautes de mon texte. Cela m'aiderait beaucoup étant donné que mon niveau en anglais est pour l'instant pas très glorieux. Je vous remercie d'avance.
Le texte :
So, today i'm going to talk about Tokyo Ghoul. This is a manga and anime made by Sui Ishida. The manga were created in 2010 and the anime in 2014. The story happens in a Japan contaminate by the Ghouls. Ghouls are creatures cannibals, so they eat the humans. This is her only one way for survives. Two kinds of Ghouls exists : The good and the bad.
The main character is Kaneki Ken and the anime turn around him. This is a young boy who likes the japanese litterature. He is very lonely and study to letter unniversity. Her nature is calm, he is shy and a little more kind. This is got him into her ruin. At the beggining of anime, he have a black hair but further to trauma, her hair by fear, bleached. He is in love with Lize, and lize will change his life.
Lize is a young woman who have a normal physic, but in reality she is a ghoul obssesed by boys. She tries to kill and eat Kaneki but she dies. And kaneki, wounded, receive her monster organs. So he become half human, half ghoul.
Hide is the best friend of Kaneki. This is her only one friend and they meet each other when they were young. He is very cool, joyful and sociable. The opposite of Kaneki. He is secretely well up for Kaneki new nature but, he never judge him. He is tries to make everything for help him. This is a really good guy.
Toka is a strong ghoul. Despite her punchs and insults, she rest a gentle girl. She will help Kaneki and with the time, she fall in love with him. She works in Antique where the kind ghoule lives. She hates to be considerate like monster, because she eats only died human.
Yoshiura is the boss of coffe "Antique". He is very calm and he will help Kaneki to accept helself. He will take on him in this coffe. We learnt about her real indentity after in the story..
Amon Kotaro is a policeman very brave. He is to fight, with this team, against the ghoules considerated like monster. he is wise and he will cherish a special relation with Kaneki.
I like this manga because he talks about a sujet very interessant. Even if the ghouls are cannibals, they can have a human felling. He makes our to reflect into the world. A human can be a monster and a monster can be a human. This is not our own nature, our own body, but the inside of us who makes who we are. Then the loves feellings are not very present, this is pleasent. I have don't read all of the manga but the anime is very good. The design is beautiful and the songs originals. This is certainly one of my favorite anime. The charactes are lovely and.. And this is all, aha.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-04-2015 23:23
Réponse: Exposé/ correction de here4u, postée le 04-04-2015 à 12:18:38 (S | E)
hello !
The main character is Kaneki Ken and the anime turn around him. This is a young boy who likes the japanese litterature. He is very lonely and study to letter unniversity. Her nature is calm, he is shy and a little more ??? kind. This is got him into her ruin. At the beggining of the animeé, he have a black hair but further to trauma, her hair by fear, bleached.(construction and word order) He is in love with Lize, and lize will change his life.
Lize is a young woman who have a normal physic, but in reality she is a ghoul obssesed by boys. She tries to kill and eat Kaneki but she dies. And kaneki, wounded, receive her monster organs. So he become half human, half ghoul.
Hide is the best friend of Kaneki(genitive, please). This is her only one friend and they meet each other when they were young. He is very cool, joyful and sociable. The opposite of Kaneki. He is secretely well up for Kaneki new nature but, he never judge him. He is tries to make everything for help him. This is a really good guy.
Toka is a strong ghoul. Despite her punchs and insults, she rest a gentle girl. She will help Kaneki and with the time, she fall in love with him. She works in Antique where the kind ghoule lives. She hates to be considerate like X monster, because she eats only died human.XXXX
Bon courage !
(not sure I didn't skip a few...) Réponse: Exposé/ correction de glassysky, postée le 05-04-2015 à 18:30:35 (S | E)
Ohw, merci beaucoup de m'avoir aidé ! C'est adorable de ta part !
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