Oral /Nursery school

Oral /Nursery school
Message de sumeyra66 posté le 02-04-2015 à 21:41:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous et à toutes.
J'ai besoin d'aide pour vérifier mon texte que je vais présenter à mon oral d'anglais.
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Voici mon texte:

I did my placement in the nursery school Jules Romain in xxx. I started my intership ontwenty fourth november and finished the nighteeth december two thousand fourteen. Everyday i started at 8h15 to 13 and 13h45 to 16h30, à part from wednesday. Because wednesday afternoon the kids hadn't school. I didn't wear a jacket in the nursery class excpt in the school cantine i weared an blouse. My father dropped me off at the nursery school and take me on 16h30 and i eated there.Mes Fioux allowed me to fond the work placement.The director was very nice with me and the preschool teachers helped me very much.


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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-04-2015 23:23

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Réponse: Oral /Nursery school de here4u, postée le 03-04-2015 à 00:09:50 (S | E)
Hello !

I did my placement in the nursery school Jules Romain in xxx. I started my intership on XXX twenty fourth XX november and finished XX the nighteeXth december two thousand fourteen. Everyday i started at 8h15 to 13 and 13h45 to 16h30, à part from wednesday. Because xx wednesday afternoon the kids hadn't school. I didn't wear a jacket in the nursery class excpt in the school cantine XXXX i weared an blouse( faux-ami!). My father dropped me off at the nursery school and take me on 16h30 and i eated there.Mes Fioux allowed me to fond the work placement??? what do you mean? .The director was very nice with me and the preschool teachers helped me very much.

Please ... Have pity ... Learn your (elementary) irregular verbs!

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Réponse: Oral /Nursery school de robyn27, postée le 03-04-2015 à 04:02:29 (S | E)
Hi sumeyra66!
Je vais essayer de corriger un peu le texte selon ma compréhension et mes connaissances limitées. Je n'arrive pas à discerner ce que vous voulez dire en écrivant 'mes fioux', c'est pour ça je le mets entre parenthèses.

I did my placement in the nursery school Jules Romain in xxx. I started my internship on twenty fourth November and finished on nineteenth December two thousand fourteen. Everyday I started at 8h15 for 13h and from 13h45 to 16h30, except on Wednesday. Because on Wednesday afternoon, the kids didn't have class. I didn't wear a jacket in the nursery class except in the school canteen I wore a blouse. My father dropped me off at the nursery school and take me at 16h30 and I ate there. (Mes Fioux) allowed me to find the work placement. The director was very nice with me and the preschool teachers helped me very much.


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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2015 10:09
Correction toute faite non admise sur le forum; mp envoyé.

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Réponse: Oral /Nursery school de sumeyra66, postée le 04-04-2015 à 00:36:44 (S | E)
Merci de m'avoir corrigé mon texte et mes fioux c'est madame fioux ma professeur

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Réponse: Oral /Nursery school de here4u, postée le 04-04-2015 à 11:48:57 (S | E)
Hello

I did my placement in the nursery school Jules Romain in xxx. I started my internship on twenty fourth November (either : 'on November 24,' or 'on the twenty fourth of November ) and finished on nineteenth December(idem) two thousand fourteen. Everyday I started(worked from) at 8h15 for 13h? ('till' or to?) and from 13h45 to 16h30, except on Wednesday. Because on Wednesday afternoonS(it's a habit = every Wednedsday), the kids didn't have class. I didn't wear a jacket in the nursery class except in the school canteen I wore a blouse('blouse' = corsage !). My father dropped me off at the nursery school and take(to pick up) me at 16h30 and I ate there. My teacher, (Mes Fioux), allowed me to find the(this) work placement. The director(Headmaster) was very nice with (to) me and the preschool teachers helped me very much.

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