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Message de alexolive59 posté le 27-03-2015 à 20:18:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je me permets de vous demander votre aide pour un travail à rendre en anglais. Je suis étudiante infirmière et la professeur qui me suit me dit que ça ne va pas ... je l'ai déjà corrigé deux fois et je suis un peu désespérée. Pourriez-vous m'aider ? Je vous remercie d'avance de votre aide.
Voici le texte :
My final year dissertation is about the nurse’s role in maintenance of elderly’s autonomy. It concerns more particularly the elderly in nursing home. My aim was find a care tool enables to help the nurse’s job. During my internships I have noted difficulties to conserve physical autonomy but I have observed about psychological autonomy more difficulties.
Thanks to my theoretical research, I discovered in majority care tool to measure physical autonomy. Psychological autonomy’s evaluation is more subjective. For the two concepts, this tool allow measure maybe the autonomy but their role in the maintenance of autonomy is blurring. I found the law of two January, two thousand and two which broaches the personalized life project’s notion. The life project autonomy is a tool containing the elderly’s needs and cravings, as their capacities.
“Is the personalized life project it an essential tool for the staff in nursing homes to maintain the elderly’s autonomy?” This is my work’s problems. My main hypothesis is that “The personalized life project maintains the elderly’s autonomy in nursing home when it is optimally use by the staff”. My ideas are that the data collection and the nurse’s training influence the quality of the maintenance of autonomy.
I conducted six investigations, four nearby nurses and two nearby elderly. I chose this method because is more interesting for collect feelings.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2015 21:15
Message de alexolive59 posté le 27-03-2015 à 20:18:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je me permets de vous demander votre aide pour un travail à rendre en anglais. Je suis étudiante infirmière et la professeur qui me suit me dit que ça ne va pas ... je l'ai déjà corrigé deux fois et je suis un peu désespérée. Pourriez-vous m'aider ? Je vous remercie d'avance de votre aide.
Voici le texte :
My final year dissertation is about the nurse’s role in maintenance of elderly’s autonomy. It concerns more particularly the elderly in nursing home. My aim was find a care tool enables to help the nurse’s job. During my internships I have noted difficulties to conserve physical autonomy but I have observed about psychological autonomy more difficulties.
Thanks to my theoretical research, I discovered in majority care tool to measure physical autonomy. Psychological autonomy’s evaluation is more subjective. For the two concepts, this tool allow measure maybe the autonomy but their role in the maintenance of autonomy is blurring. I found the law of two January, two thousand and two which broaches the personalized life project’s notion. The life project autonomy is a tool containing the elderly’s needs and cravings, as their capacities.
“Is the personalized life project it an essential tool for the staff in nursing homes to maintain the elderly’s autonomy?” This is my work’s problems. My main hypothesis is that “The personalized life project maintains the elderly’s autonomy in nursing home when it is optimally use by the staff”. My ideas are that the data collection and the nurse’s training influence the quality of the maintenance of autonomy.
I conducted six investigations, four nearby nurses and two nearby elderly. I chose this method because is more interesting for collect feelings.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2015 21:15
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