Correction/Mythes et héros
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Message de solembum posté le 01-03-2015 à 19:21:56 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
C'est mon premier post, et j'aurais besoin d'aide pour une correction de traduction.
Je dois travailler sur des notions, en terminale, et j'ai essayé de faire un texte par notion, mais il doit y avoir pas mal de fautes.
Donc j'aimerais savoir s'il était possible à quelqu'un de les corriger
Je précise que je devais me baser sur les documents vus en cours, et que je ne serai interrogé que sur une seule notion, j'ai donc gardé la même formulation de départ.
1)--> I’m going to talk about the notion of myth and heroes.
First of all I would like to give a definition of this notion. A myth is a real or invented story which including humans or animals characters, who are wonderful or divine. In the myth we are telling their adventures which relate generally to a religious or popular belief.
A hero is also a person real or fictitious who has making an extraordinary act which has doing enter his name in the legend and who is quote for example.
To my mind Robin Hood is a good illustration of a myth, we don’t know if he was lived but he is very popular and he is known as a robber who steal rich to help the poor. Another story is the myth of Prometheus. He was a Titan. He made man and he stole the fire from Zeus which is representing the knowledge. We have also the Whale Rider in the Maori’s culture; it’s the legend of the first people who has becoming in their village on the back of a whale.
Commonly, a hero is a super hero, with superpower, like Superman or Hulk. But in the reality we have a lot of person who are making extraordinary acts in the real life: the firemen or the group of hero in the street of New York calling Superheroes Anonymous who is helping the person at stake in the city and there are also great men like Alan Turing in the World War II who are allowed to change and improve the world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2015 21:20
Message de solembum posté le 01-03-2015 à 19:21:56 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
C'est mon premier post, et j'aurais besoin d'aide pour une correction de traduction.
Je dois travailler sur des notions, en terminale, et j'ai essayé de faire un texte par notion, mais il doit y avoir pas mal de fautes.
Donc j'aimerais savoir s'il était possible à quelqu'un de les corriger
Je précise que je devais me baser sur les documents vus en cours, et que je ne serai interrogé que sur une seule notion, j'ai donc gardé la même formulation de départ.1)--> I’m going to talk about the notion of myth and heroes.
First of all I would like to give a definition of this notion. A myth is a real or invented story which including humans or animals characters, who are wonderful or divine. In the myth we are telling their adventures which relate generally to a religious or popular belief.
A hero is also a person real or fictitious who has making an extraordinary act which has doing enter his name in the legend and who is quote for example.
To my mind Robin Hood is a good illustration of a myth, we don’t know if he was lived but he is very popular and he is known as a robber who steal rich to help the poor. Another story is the myth of Prometheus. He was a Titan. He made man and he stole the fire from Zeus which is representing the knowledge. We have also the Whale Rider in the Maori’s culture; it’s the legend of the first people who has becoming in their village on the back of a whale.
Commonly, a hero is a super hero, with superpower, like Superman or Hulk. But in the reality we have a lot of person who are making extraordinary acts in the real life: the firemen or the group of hero in the street of New York calling Superheroes Anonymous who is helping the person at stake in the city and there are also great men like Alan Turing in the World War II who are allowed to change and improve the world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2015 21:20
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