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Message de destroyx posté le 22-02-2015 à 00:35:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous vérifier mon texte s'il vous plait et me dire s'il y a des fautes ou autres; merci pour vos réponses.
Voici le sujet:
Je suis un organisateur d'un concours d'innovation à Liège et je dois envoyer une lettre à une personne en l'invitant à venir au concours ainsi que lui donner des conseils. Le thème de mon sujet est le marketing.
Dear Mr. Tommy,
My name is Marc. I'm an organizer of innovation fair in Liège. I invite you to a contest to win a big prize. The prize is a sum of money. There are two million to win. There will be thousand participating in total. But there will only one winner. In innovation fair in Liège, there will be children and adults. So, you should create a product who target children but also adults. However, two condition are required to participate in the contest. First, you must find an innovation which does not exist. Second, you must have a slogan that matches your product. There will be three jury will evaluate you. I'm looking forward to seeing you in our contest.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2015 10:19
Message de destroyx posté le 22-02-2015 à 00:35:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous vérifier mon texte s'il vous plait et me dire s'il y a des fautes ou autres; merci pour vos réponses.
Voici le sujet:
Je suis un organisateur d'un concours d'innovation à Liège et je dois envoyer une lettre à une personne en l'invitant à venir au concours ainsi que lui donner des conseils. Le thème de mon sujet est le marketing.
Dear Mr. Tommy,
My name is Marc. I'm an organizer of innovation fair in Liège. I invite you to a contest to win a big prize. The prize is a sum of money. There are two million to win. There will be thousand participating in total. But there will only one winner. In innovation fair in Liège, there will be children and adults. So, you should create a product who target children but also adults. However, two condition are required to participate in the contest. First, you must find an innovation which does not exist. Second, you must have a slogan that matches your product. There will be three jury will evaluate you. I'm looking forward to seeing you in our contest.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2015 10:19
Réponse: Concours/Marketing de here4u, postée le 22-02-2015 à 18:45:00 (S | E)
Hello !
Dear Mr. Tommy,
My name is Marc. I'm an organizer of XXx innovation fair in Liège. I invite (really too direct!) you to a contest to win a big prize. The prize is a sum of money. There are two million (2 million what?) to win. There will be thousand participating in total. But there will only XX one winner. In XXX innovation fair in Liège, there will be children and adults. So, you should create a product who target children but also adults. However, two condition are required to participate in the contest. First, you must find an innovation which does not exist. Second, you must have a slogan that matches your product. There will be three jury XXXX will evaluate you. I'm looking forward to seeing you in our contest.
end of letter ?
Réponse: Concours/Marketing de destroyx, postée le 22-02-2015 à 19:00:11 (S | E)
Merci. Que signifient les couleurs bleu et vert ?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2015 19:15
Réponse: Concours/Marketing de here4u, postée le 22-02-2015 à 23:54:44 (S | E)
Hello !
C'est une convention sur le site (pas de rouge ni de rose sur le Forum ...)
Bleu = faux
vert = suggestion
XXXX= éléments manquants.
azert= maladroit ...
Bon courage !
Réponse: Concours/Marketing de destroyx, postée le 23-02-2015 à 16:38:20 (S | E)
Merci.
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