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Message de jadee55 posté le 01-02-2015 à 22:02:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plait ? Merci beaucoup d'avance.
Engineers of Samsung would have invent a headphones for detect likelihood of a stroke. They currently work about a headphones which is able to prevent likelihood of a stroke. For this, this headphone survey the brainwaves unblock by the neurons.
The functonning is simply: The sensor sits around the area where the brain is located inside a person’s head, the headset and companion app are then activated and the headset wirelessly transmits the brainwave data to the app. We can observe the brainwaves in a smarphone, tablet and ordinatery
after, the app, measure the probability of stroke. This early detection sensor and algorithm parckage detect irregularities of the brain and enable to take all the necessary precautions for avoid this;
This device collects brainwave info and, determines the chances of a stroke in sixty seconds. when used for longer sessions, this technology can analyze neurological health, for exemple stress, anxiety and sleep patterns
Samsung explain that the sensor of the equipment are more accurate and more effective that the device who are use in hospital.
In fact, Engineers have employed a very conductor equipment who permit to wear sensors with discretion.
And according to creator, engineers work even, for adapt this equipment in the area of cardiology
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-02-2015 22:16
Message de jadee55 posté le 01-02-2015 à 22:02:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plait ? Merci beaucoup d'avance.
Engineers of Samsung would have invent a headphones for detect likelihood of a stroke. They currently work about a headphones which is able to prevent likelihood of a stroke. For this, this headphone survey the brainwaves unblock by the neurons.
The functonning is simply: The sensor sits around the area where the brain is located inside a person’s head, the headset and companion app are then activated and the headset wirelessly transmits the brainwave data to the app. We can observe the brainwaves in a smarphone, tablet and ordinatery
after, the app, measure the probability of stroke. This early detection sensor and algorithm parckage detect irregularities of the brain and enable to take all the necessary precautions for avoid this;
This device collects brainwave info and, determines the chances of a stroke in sixty seconds. when used for longer sessions, this technology can analyze neurological health, for exemple stress, anxiety and sleep patterns
Samsung explain that the sensor of the equipment are more accurate and more effective that the device who are use in hospital.
In fact, Engineers have employed a very conductor equipment who permit to wear sensors with discretion.
And according to creator, engineers work even, for adapt this equipment in the area of cardiology
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-02-2015 22:16
Réponse: Brain /correction de here4u, postée le 02-02-2015 à 12:34:49 (S | E)
Hello !
I'll have a go !
XXX Engineers of Samsung would have invent a headphonesLien internet
for detect XXX likelihood of a stroke. They currently work about a headphones which is able to prevent XXX likelihood of a stroke.(You're repeatng yourself ...) For this, this headphone survey the brainwaves unblock by the neurons.
The functonning is simply: The sensor sits around the area where the brain is located inside a person’s head, the headset and companion app are then activated and the headset wirelessly transmits the brainwave data to the app. We can observe the brainwaves in a smarphone, X tablet and X ordinatery
after, the app, measure the probability of X stroke. This early detection sensor and algorithm parckage??? detect irregularities of the brain and enable to take all the necessary precautions for avoid this;
This device collects brainwave info and, determines the chances of a stroke in sixty seconds. when used for longer sessions, this technology can analyze neurological health, for exemple stress, anxiety and sleep patterns;
Samsung explain that the sensor of the equipment are more accurate and more effective that the device who are use in hospital.
In fact, Engineers have employed a very conductor equipment who permit to wear sensors with discretion.
And according to XXX creator, engineers work even, for adapt this equipment in the area of cardiology
Let's hope it'll help !
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