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Message de trauzeur posté le 10-01-2015 à 07:44:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce devoir s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
I am going to tell you briefly about my favourite free-time activity.
It’s all about computer games. I quite like them. As a child, computer games fascinated me and I became interested in it. The thing is when I play them I feel free; I mean I forget everything around. It’s a good way for me to relax especially when I’m stressed out. I often play with my friends. They come and we buy a drink or two and sometimes I play on my own. I don’t really mind one way or the other.
But I suppose one day I will have to stop playing them because I reckon they have a very nasty side. In fact, they can take over people’s life a bit and I remember sometimes I can play for hours and hours forgetting important things I have to do.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-01-2015 08:26
Message de trauzeur posté le 10-01-2015 à 07:44:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce devoir s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
I am going to tell you briefly about my favourite free-time activity.
It’s all about computer games. I quite like them. As a child, computer games fascinated me and I became interested in it. The thing is when I play them I feel free; I mean I forget everything around. It’s a good way for me to relax especially when I’m stressed out. I often play with my friends. They come and we buy a drink or two and sometimes I play on my own. I don’t really mind one way or the other.
But I suppose one day I will have to stop playing them because I reckon they have a very nasty side. In fact, they can take over people’s life a bit and I remember sometimes I can play for hours and hours forgetting important things I have to do.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-01-2015 08:26
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de gerondif, postée le 10-01-2015 à 12:49:50 (S | E)
Hello,
As a child, computer games(pluriel, ok) fascinated me and I became interested in it(singulier, pas ok!).
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de sherry48, postée le 10-01-2015 à 14:18:34 (S | E)
Hello.
In addition to gerondif's correction, I would add one more. For 'people’s life'...life is singular, but people is not. Which correction will you make, singular or plural?
Sherry
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Modifié par sherry48 le 10-01-2015 14:18
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de trauzeur, postée le 11-01-2015 à 10:27:43 (S | E)
Hello Sherry,
Excuse me but I don't get your question? Could you please be
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-01-2015 10:51
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de gerondif, postée le 11-01-2015 à 10:42:28 (S | E)
Hello,
"people’s life " est faux parce que les gens ont chacun une vie, donc pluriel:
en français on dit aux élèves: Ouvrez votre livre alors qu'en anglais on dit :"Open your books" 25 élèves, 25 livres...
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de trauzeur, postée le 11-01-2015 à 11:02:56 (S | E)
Hello,
So I should have said "in people lives"?
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de gerondif, postée le 11-01-2015 à 11:53:59 (S | E)
Hello,
in people lives" est faux car il manque le cas possessif: les vies des gens
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de sherry48, postée le 11-01-2015 à 14:57:36 (S | E)
Hello trauzeur,
Gerondif has answered your question, I think.
If you wanted to use the singular form, you would have to say...in a person's life.
Sherry
Réponse: Correction/Loisirs de trauzeur, postée le 11-01-2015 à 15:59:34 (S | E)
Hello,
I got it.
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