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Message de lizzie posté le 28-12-2014 à 13:32:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire une histoire fantastique pour mes cours. Voici quelques phrases en anglais. Serait-il possible que quelqu'un les corrige et m'aide à comprendre mes erreurs?
Merci d'avance.
Bonne journée.
Elected President of Ireland in 2006, Little Bob immediately expressed the need to talk to her mother.
Using his own life as an example, he showed that love was the most important thing.
Speeches are usually used by a President when he has to inform people of extremely important elements.
In this speech Little Bobby said he loved the place where he lived.
Yet, Little Bobby's family was not a loving one. He was born during war.
In 1964, Freedom, the city where he lived, was marked by war. In 2006, conflicts were not yet resolved.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2014 16:09
Message de lizzie posté le 28-12-2014 à 13:32:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire une histoire fantastique pour mes cours. Voici quelques phrases en anglais. Serait-il possible que quelqu'un les corrige et m'aide à comprendre mes erreurs?
Merci d'avance.
Bonne journée.
Elected President of Ireland in 2006, Little Bob immediately expressed the need to talk to her mother.
Using his own life as an example, he showed that love was the most important thing.
Speeches are usually used by a President when he has to inform people of extremely important elements.
In this speech Little Bobby said he loved the place where he lived.
Yet, Little Bobby's family was not a loving one. He was born during war.
In 1964, Freedom, the city where he lived, was marked by war. In 2006, conflicts were not yet resolved.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2014 16:09
Réponse: Phrases/correction de bluestar, postée le 28-12-2014 à 16:08:33 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Erreurs sont en bleu ; suggestions en vert
Elected President of Ireland in 2006, Little Bob immediately expressed the need to talk to her mother.
Using his own life as an example, he showed that love was(temps?) the most important thing.
Speeches are usually used (un autre verbe ici) by a President when he has to inform the people of extremely important elements.('matters' serait plus adapte ici)
In this speech Little Bobby said he loved the place where he lived.
Yet, Little Bobby's family was not a loving one. He was born during war.
In 1964, Freedom, the city where he lived, was marked by war. In 2006, conflicts were not yet resolved.
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