Rédaction /interview

Rédaction /interview
Message de sarah98 posté le 28-09-2014 à 21:24:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous corriger ma rédaction s'il vous plaît ?
Le sujet est " Vous interviewez un élève anglais qui vient passer l'année dans votre lycée pour le magazine de l'école "

Toda we'll meet Jordan, who comes to spend one year in our school.
Hello Jordan where you came from ?
Hello,i'm from England
Can you explain hy you decided to spend one year in France ?
For starters i always love France,the french language i wanted to leave to the discovery of a new world.
What are your motivations?
My goal this year is to know how to speak French like a real French
Well. What are you first impressions?
The French language seems to me a bit complicated but the people here are friendly available.
They are always there to help me and motivates me a lot.
And high school life like you?
Yes

Merci pour vos réponses.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-09-2014 21:41

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Réponse: Rédaction /interview de hushpuppy, postée le 28-09-2014 à 21:49:12 (S | E)
Bonjour,

Toda we'll meet Jordan, who comes to spend one year in our school.
Today we'll meet Jordan, who comesmettre en passé to spend a year inautre préposition, on ne veut pas dire qu'il restera à l’intérieur pendant un an
Hello Jordan where you came from ?
Hellovirgule Jordan virgule where did you come from? interrogative du passé en anglais, did you + verbe présent
Hello,i'm from England
Hello, I came from England La réponse à la question que tu as posé. Sinon on peut demander "Where do you come from (interrogative du présent) dont laquelle la réponse serait "I am from England"
Can you explain why you decided to spend one year in France ?
OK
For starters i always love France,the french language i wanted to leave to the discovery of a new world.
For startersvirgule I ____ always love_ France on veut parler du passé au présent (omit virgule) ajouter une conjonction the French languagepoint I also wanted to leave to the discovery trop de mots, on peut utiliser "discovery" tout seul mais comme une verbe a new world.
What are your motivations?
OK
My goal this year is to know how to speak French like a real French _____ un mot manque

Well. What are you first impressions?
OK
The French language seems to me a bit complicated but the people here are friendly available.

They are always there to help me and motivates me a lot.
OK
And high school life like you? pas sûre du sens
Yes

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Réponse: Rédaction /interview de sherry48, postée le 29-09-2014 à 13:40:52 (S | E)
Hello.

In addition to all that hushpuppy has written, just three more items.
What are you__ first impressions?
They are always there to help me and motivates me a lot. You can fix this with subject/verb agreement or by adding another word.
And high school life like you? This is a question, so begin with the auxiliary verb.
Sherry

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