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Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En basMessage de leopigboss posté le 31-08-2014 à 15:09:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?je rentre en classe de 2nd et je dois me présenter en anglais à l'oral à la rentrée (gouts, famille, loisirs, vacances...)
de me corriger s'il y a des fautes..(conjugaison,......)
My name is Paul. I’m five teen years. I am a secondary-school pupil in year eleven at the secondary school "....".I was born the seventeen October of nineteen/ninety nine. I’m French. I live in Paris.
I practice triathlon. This sport consists to swim, bike, and run in one race.
I like sport. I love triathlon who is the sport I practice. In this sport, my favorite discipline is the running race. Also I like play football or volleyball with my friends. And I like read sports magazine.
I don't like stay at home and not do anything. I don't like be tired or sick. I dislike wait during one hour.
I like steak and chips. And I love chocolate cake. I dislike anything.
I have one brother. His name is Jules. He’s ten years and it’s in year six. Jules practices swimming and running.
My parents are French.
My mother’s name is Christine and she is fifty years. She is a secretary in a primary school.
My father’s name is Gilles and he’s fifty two years. He’s a cook in a restaurant.
My parents practice running and a little bit of swimming.
I'm didn't go in holidays this year.
But I went to the beach with my friends. I played volleyball, football and I swam in the sea.
Also, I went to the Walibi amusement park with my family and one friend. It was funny.
During July and August, I did a lot of racing bike and mountain bike with my friends and my father.
And, I took part to three running race, and one triathlon.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-08-2014 17:35
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