Aide/lettre motivation
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Message de mamazinda posté le 08-05-2014 à 21:44:20 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je dois rendre une lettre de motivation, mais je suis tellement pressée que j'ai peur de faire des fautes énormes...
Pouvez-vous prendre un peu de votre temps pour me corrigersvp s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour votre aide.
Hello my name is ********** and I would like to enter in the ********'s European section.
English is the language which I prefer, and I liked a lot all the activities which we made this year, with the class. I liked a lot the way take place English courses, which were not the same that 6è or 5è or not similar for the other classes.
I liked a lot the hour of DNL which we made history, and it was very interesting because it show us a different point of view of the World War for example... Sometimes, in DNL, we also watch the BBC news, what allowed me to learn things which take place at the moment, as for example on what made Malala Yousafzaï ….
Furthermore if I am taken in European section of sciences, it will be interesting all the more to learn words which everybody knows in French, but not in English, and it would be brilliant because I would like to work in the scientific domain later and probably not in France.
I would like very much being accepted in this European section, because I kept one very good memory of my 4è and 3è European, and I would like that they continues next year………….…
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2014 21:47
Message de mamazinda posté le 08-05-2014 à 21:44:20 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
je dois rendre une lettre de motivation, mais je suis tellement pressée que j'ai peur de faire des fautes énormes...
Pouvez-vous prendre un peu de votre temps pour me corriger
Merci pour votre aide.
Hello my name is ********** and I would like to enter in the ********'s European section.
English is the language which I prefer, and I liked a lot all the activities which we made this year, with the class. I liked a lot the way take place English courses, which were not the same that 6è or 5è or not similar for the other classes.
I liked a lot the hour of DNL which we made history, and it was very interesting because it show us a different point of view of the World War for example... Sometimes, in DNL, we also watch the BBC news, what allowed me to learn things which take place at the moment, as for example on what made Malala Yousafzaï ….
Furthermore if I am taken in European section of sciences, it will be interesting all the more to learn words which everybody knows in French, but not in English, and it would be brilliant because I would like to work in the scientific domain later and probably not in France.
I would like very much being accepted in this European section, because I kept one very good memory of my 4è and 3è European, and I would like that they continues next year………….…
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2014 21:47
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