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Message de zoozimaths posté le 04-05-2014 à 17:00:15
Bonjour
j'ai mon oral d'anglais très bientôt dans 5 jours^^.
Et je voudrais vérifier si ma présentation pour la notion mythes et héros est bonne.Dans mon lycée on doit faire notre présentation en reliant la notion à un sujet précis et une problématique précise donnée en classe.En ce qui concerne la notion Mythes et héros je dois l'assimiler au sujet "the best job in the world" et à la problématique "what is the best job in the world?".
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît? Merci pour vos réponses.
Im going to talk about of the notion "mythes and heroes".A mythe is like a dream story with a moral and a hero can je a protagonist of this mythe.Tha's why I would like to illustrate this notion through the topic "The best job in the world".Indeed the best job in thé world is a dream job which does not exist and we can say that people who wants to get this job wants to be a hero.We will explain that by answers the problematic "What is the job in thé world?".
First, the best job in the world need to be accessible to anyone then this job must have a high salary and very nice working conditions.Besides It should give opportunities to travelling around the world , to doing something new every day.Of course the timetable must be flexible.For example we studied an ad for "the best job in the world campaign of 2009" in class.This job is very close to my vision of the best in the world.Indeed you could earn almost 20 000 euros per month juste cleaning the pool and collecting mails.Moreover this job allowed to meet famous people and to travel everywhere in Australia.In addition the working environnement looks like an heavenly place.The only inconvenient was that the contract lasted 6 months only.Finally It was a once-in-a-lifetime opportuny.Consequently, dream jobs exist as once-in-a-lifetime opportunities the real life and those who have the luck to profits this can be considering as heroes because they can be a part of the mythe of "The best job in the world".
In that way, we studied an other document in class.Its about an ad to recruit volunteer for the London 2012 olympics games who should works as ticket inspectors and uniform distributors.There was no waige in these works,that's why we can say that it was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunities to be a hero for your country, to represents it and to meet your idols.That's show that the best job in the world is not necessary a job where you earn easy money but where you have the chance to live somethings spécial.
As a conclusion, we cant defined the best job in the world because it's a mythe so a dream.Everybody have dreams but nobody have the same dreams.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2014 18:13
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2014 15:45
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Message de zoozimaths posté le 04-05-2014 à 17:00:15
Bonjour
j'ai mon oral d'anglais très bientôt dans 5 jours^^.
Et je voudrais vérifier si ma présentation pour la notion mythes et héros est bonne.Dans mon lycée on doit faire notre présentation en reliant la notion à un sujet précis et une problématique précise donnée en classe.En ce qui concerne la notion Mythes et héros je dois l'assimiler au sujet "the best job in the world" et à la problématique "what is the best job in the world?".
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît? Merci pour vos réponses.
Im going to talk about of the notion "mythes and heroes".A mythe is like a dream story with a moral and a hero can je a protagonist of this mythe.Tha's why I would like to illustrate this notion through the topic "The best job in the world".Indeed the best job in thé world is a dream job which does not exist and we can say that people who wants to get this job wants to be a hero.We will explain that by answers the problematic "What is the job in thé world?".
First, the best job in the world need to be accessible to anyone then this job must have a high salary and very nice working conditions.Besides It should give opportunities to travelling around the world , to doing something new every day.Of course the timetable must be flexible.For example we studied an ad for "the best job in the world campaign of 2009" in class.This job is very close to my vision of the best in the world.Indeed you could earn almost 20 000 euros per month juste cleaning the pool and collecting mails.Moreover this job allowed to meet famous people and to travel everywhere in Australia.In addition the working environnement looks like an heavenly place.The only inconvenient was that the contract lasted 6 months only.Finally It was a once-in-a-lifetime opportuny.Consequently, dream jobs exist as once-in-a-lifetime opportunities the real life and those who have the luck to profits this can be considering as heroes because they can be a part of the mythe of "The best job in the world".
In that way, we studied an other document in class.Its about an ad to recruit volunteer for the London 2012 olympics games who should works as ticket inspectors and uniform distributors.There was no waige in these works,that's why we can say that it was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunities to be a hero for your country, to represents it and to meet your idols.That's show that the best job in the world is not necessary a job where you earn easy money but where you have the chance to live somethings spécial.
As a conclusion, we cant defined the best job in the world because it's a mythe so a dream.Everybody have dreams but nobody have the same dreams.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2014 18:13
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2014 15:45
Nouveau texte corrigé posté par la suite.
Réponse: Bac/Myths and heroes de ringo74, postée le 04-05-2014 à 17:07:16
Bonjour,
étaye ta conclusion. Cela doit être un "recap" de tout ce que tu as dit auparavant. Et essaye aussi de corriger les erreurs d'orthographe et de grammaire ;)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2014 18:16
Réponse: Bac/Myths and heroes de zoozimaths, postée le 04-05-2014 à 17:19:42
Sinon ça va le contenu? Les fautes super graves c'est à cause de ma tablette qui "corrige" automatiquement l'orthographe des mots que j'écris mais d'après le français donc quand j'écris en anglais tu vois ce que je veux dire^^.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-05-2014 18:17
la vilaine tablette fait aussi des fautes en français!Réponse: Bac/Myths and heroes de ringo74, postée le 04-05-2014 à 19:36:53
Re bonjour,
le contenu est assez correct même si partir de l'idée de "best job in the world" me parait étrange pour illustrer cette notion.
Par contre, des phrases comme "Indeed the best job in the world is a dream job which does not exist and we can say that people who wants to get this job wants to be a hero" ont besoin d'être expliquées...
sinon, il faut vraiment corriger les fautes, les oublis de mots etc qui sont plutôt signe d'un anglais moyen ;)
Réponse: Bac/Myths and heroes de zoozimaths, postée le 04-05-2014 à 21:38:32
Moi aussi je trouve que c'est bizarre mais je suis obligé de répondre à la problématique "what is the best job?" en faisant l'exposé sur la notion.Pour lieux et formes de pouvoir "can we leave a gang?" et idée de progrès " can we leave without technologies?"ça a déjà plus de sens ^^.Sinon merci pour vos remarques.
