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Message de meghan66mm posté le 31-03-2014 à 18:33:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans deux semaines et j'aurais aimé savoir si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance.
Among the whole of propositions offered by the notion "spaces and exchanges", I chose to speak about the virtual spaces.
In an era of advanced technology, virtual spaces take up more and more of our lives. their influence can be noted in our everyday life and also in how we relate to other people, all over the world.
in the first part i'll discuss growth of the internet, and then the influence of this échances virtual spaces .
First, talk about social networks. The internet has changed the world faster than any other technological discovery. The main use of the internet nowadays consists in using the social networks. They are communities of individuals who exchange messages, share information and cooperate on joint activities on the internet.
User participation in the production of content is crucial. The most famous sites are Youtube, Facebook and Twitter. But, there is also, it is free multilingual internet-based encyclopaedia All which started in 2001. It is collaboratively edited by Volunteers all around the world. Almost all the item can be writted and modified by users with Any access to the site. It Has Become the large largest reference work on the internet. More and more people purchase goods and services over the internet because they find it easy and convenient. This widespread popularity is also due to the progress in internet connections . In electronic commerce buyers buy directly from a seller on the internet in a virtual store. the largest corporations are eBay and Amazon.com, both American
This allows a huge opening to the world and creates a virtual world.
now, i should talk about the influence and exchange of big city. now, i shoulds talk about the impact of exchange and city. They are megacities with several million Inhabitants, dense centers and sprawling outskirt. By Their importance, They influenced the world in terms of politics, economics and culture.Megacities with over 10 million inhabitants include tokyo, Beijing, New york, mumbai, lagos. They are international financial centres and marketplaces, but also multicutural cities, with diversity of languages and cultures. On the negative side, their populations are confronted with congestion, pollution and overcrowding. Permanent interactions between societies all over the world result in borrowing between the nations in different fields.
Some countries have several official languages: for instance, there are 11 offici
To conclude, the new means of communication have permi to create virtual worlds. these virtual worlds allow trade with the world, our language, our customs .. In addition, the virtual world has created large city that became the center of the world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-03-2014 18:54
Message de meghan66mm posté le 31-03-2014 à 18:33:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans deux semaines et j'aurais aimé savoir si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance.
Among the whole of propositions offered by the notion "spaces and exchanges", I chose to speak about the virtual spaces.
In an era of advanced technology, virtual spaces take up more and more of our lives. their influence can be noted in our everyday life and also in how we relate to other people, all over the world.
in the first part i'll discuss growth of the internet, and then the influence of this échances virtual spaces .
First, talk about social networks. The internet has changed the world faster than any other technological discovery. The main use of the internet nowadays consists in using the social networks. They are communities of individuals who exchange messages, share information and cooperate on joint activities on the internet.
User participation in the production of content is crucial. The most famous sites are Youtube, Facebook and Twitter. But, there is also, it is free multilingual internet-based encyclopaedia All which started in 2001. It is collaboratively edited by Volunteers all around the world. Almost all the item can be writted and modified by users with Any access to the site. It Has Become the large largest reference work on the internet. More and more people purchase goods and services over the internet because they find it easy and convenient. This widespread popularity is also due to the progress in internet connections . In electronic commerce buyers buy directly from a seller on the internet in a virtual store. the largest corporations are eBay and Amazon.com, both American
This allows a huge opening to the world and creates a virtual world.
now, i should talk about the influence and exchange of big city. now, i shoulds talk about the impact of exchange and city. They are megacities with several million Inhabitants, dense centers and sprawling outskirt. By Their importance, They influenced the world in terms of politics, economics and culture.Megacities with over 10 million inhabitants include tokyo, Beijing, New york, mumbai, lagos. They are international financial centres and marketplaces, but also multicutural cities, with diversity of languages and cultures. On the negative side, their populations are confronted with congestion, pollution and overcrowding. Permanent interactions between societies all over the world result in borrowing between the nations in different fields.
Some countries have several official languages: for instance, there are 11 offici
To conclude, the new means of communication have permi to create virtual worlds. these virtual worlds allow trade with the world, our language, our customs .. In addition, the virtual world has created large city that became the center of the world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-03-2014 18:54
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