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Message de caroliine91 posté le 30-01-2014 à 21:47:28 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des corrections à faire sur ce bout d'oral ?
Merci beaucoup !
In class, we studied a document " Women in World War two" who shows that
as in World War One, women played a vital part in the country’s success in World War two.
During the men are fighting, many women found employment in the Civil Service, in teaching and in medicine that they had to leave when they got married .
Women were called on to help on the land and the Women's Land Army was re-formed in July 1939. Their work was vital as so many men were being called up into the military. Moreover, many women decided that they would work in factory. They worked in all manner of production ranging from making ammunition to uniforms to aeroplanes. Those who moved away were paid more. So, during the war the women are very important for the Land because we can not count on more than them, while the men are at war.
However, after the Second World War, the role of women was to care for her children and her home, so to be a housewives while the man was working to support the family. It’s only him who gained money, he was the bread winner. Those women who had special provisions for exercise scientific role faced an even more marked than the side letters dam. This exaggeration has led , in turn, feminism of the early twentieth century. The woman enters the voting in 1944. Then the woman access to abortion rights January 17, 1975 thanks to the Veil Act. In the field of labor , women do not always have the same position as the man : It was not until 1982 that the principle of equal access to jobs says. In 1965, they can exercise a profession without the permission of their husband and collect the main unemployment benefit. Previously, they were considered dependent husband thereby precluding the right to compensation. Women now account for half of the assets : the activity rate among women 25-59 increased from 60 % in 1975 to 82% in 2007. The emancipation of women in French society was instrumental in the evolution of the family. Indeed , it becomes independent As the years . So, we can confirm that Women’s power has evolded
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-01-2014 22:01
Message de caroliine91 posté le 30-01-2014 à 21:47:28 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des corrections à faire sur ce bout d'oral ?
Merci beaucoup !
In class, we studied a document " Women in World War two" who shows that
as in World War One, women played a vital part in the country’s success in World War two.
During the men are fighting, many women found employment in the Civil Service, in teaching and in medicine that they had to leave when they got married .
Women were called on to help on the land and the Women's Land Army was re-formed in July 1939. Their work was vital as so many men were being called up into the military. Moreover, many women decided that they would work in factory. They worked in all manner of production ranging from making ammunition to uniforms to aeroplanes. Those who moved away were paid more. So, during the war the women are very important for the Land because we can not count on more than them, while the men are at war.
However, after the Second World War, the role of women was to care for her children and her home, so to be a housewives while the man was working to support the family. It’s only him who gained money, he was the bread winner. Those women who had special provisions for exercise scientific role faced an even more marked than the side letters dam. This exaggeration has led , in turn, feminism of the early twentieth century. The woman enters the voting in 1944. Then the woman access to abortion rights January 17, 1975 thanks to the Veil Act. In the field of labor , women do not always have the same position as the man : It was not until 1982 that the principle of equal access to jobs says. In 1965, they can exercise a profession without the permission of their husband and collect the main unemployment benefit. Previously, they were considered dependent husband thereby precluding the right to compensation. Women now account for half of the assets : the activity rate among women 25-59 increased from 60 % in 1975 to 82% in 2007. The emancipation of women in French society was instrumental in the evolution of the family. Indeed , it becomes independent As the years . So, we can confirm that Women’s power has evolded
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-01-2014 22:01
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