Correction/ frigo du futur
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Message de grt posté le 20-01-2014 à 16:37:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois faire un texte en anglais en imaginant le frigo du futur.Pour cela, je dois utiliser la forme passive + could + would lorsque c'est possible.Ci-dessous, mon texte, pourriez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes.
Merci d'avance.
In the first place, the fridge of the futur would be connected and interactive, with touchscreen, which would be known more about your food than you would do. In addition, database would be used to recommend cocktail recipes with the items available, and also, it even warns users if food would be about to go out of date. Track of all food stored would be also kept and the food you put inside would be recognised. Over and above, the fridge's door would be transparent. You won't need to open the fridge to see what's inside.
Another possible innovation, the fridge of the futur would be filled with a special gel. Thus, the fridge could be mounted on a wall, horizontally, vertically or even on the ceiling. To use the fridge, food would be pushed into it’s special gel (which has no odor and is not sticky). As a consequence, once inserted it would be suspended and cooled until you need it again.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-01-2014 21:16
Message de grt posté le 20-01-2014 à 16:37:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois faire un texte en anglais en imaginant le frigo du futur.Pour cela, je dois utiliser la forme passive + could + would lorsque c'est possible.Ci-dessous, mon texte, pourriez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes.
Merci d'avance.
In the first place, the fridge of the futur would be connected and interactive, with touchscreen, which would be known more about your food than you would do. In addition, database would be used to recommend cocktail recipes with the items available, and also, it even warns users if food would be about to go out of date. Track of all food stored would be also kept and the food you put inside would be recognised. Over and above, the fridge's door would be transparent. You won't need to open the fridge to see what's inside.
Another possible innovation, the fridge of the futur would be filled with a special gel. Thus, the fridge could be mounted on a wall, horizontally, vertically or even on the ceiling. To use the fridge, food would be pushed into it’s special gel (which has no odor and is not sticky). As a consequence, once inserted it would be suspended and cooled until you need it again.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-01-2014 21:16
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