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Message de swggucci67 posté le 28-11-2013 à 21:59:45 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
Je voudrais savoir s'il y a beaucoup d'erreurs dans ma présentation de projet.. J'ai beaucoup de doutes sur les temps utilisés
Merci beaucoup !
In the first place, i would like to say something about the english lesson in the University. At first sight, it seems that i was amazed about the difference in the english lesson between High school and University. We are more free and we advance in our own rhythm. For that reason, i think that’s more interesting than the others english lesson.
During the first semester, first and foremost i worked mostly the english grammar and vocabulary. Speaking personally, it’s very important because it’s the base, and the base must be very good. Then, i worked about the public speaking and how do a good presentation, i watched english movie to improve my listening, i read articles to improve my reading and mainly for ameliorate my writing with the summaries. I listen also too many english music, and i think it helps me sometimes.
In conclusion, during the first semester, i tried to improve my listening, my writing, my reading… Last, but not least, i think i found my weak points. I must improve my listening and my english speaking. For this, from my point of view, i must watched more english films and i must read more.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2013 22:01
Message de swggucci67 posté le 28-11-2013 à 21:59:45 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
Je voudrais savoir s'il y a beaucoup d'erreurs dans ma présentation de projet.. J'ai beaucoup de doutes sur les temps utilisés
Merci beaucoup !
In the first place, i would like to say something about the english lesson in the University. At first sight, it seems that i was amazed about the difference in the english lesson between High school and University. We are more free and we advance in our own rhythm. For that reason, i think that’s more interesting than the others english lesson.
During the first semester, first and foremost i worked mostly the english grammar and vocabulary. Speaking personally, it’s very important because it’s the base, and the base must be very good. Then, i worked about the public speaking and how do a good presentation, i watched english movie to improve my listening, i read articles to improve my reading and mainly for ameliorate my writing with the summaries. I listen also too many english music, and i think it helps me sometimes.
In conclusion, during the first semester, i tried to improve my listening, my writing, my reading… Last, but not least, i think i found my weak points. I must improve my listening and my english speaking. For this, from my point of view, i must watched more english films and i must read more.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2013 22:01
Réponse: Présentation /correction de sanna6, postée le 29-11-2013 à 16:47:34 (S | E)
Bonjour
Je ne peux pas vous aider, parce que je ne sais pas mais
Ce dont je suis sûre
...Les i, je les mettrais en majuscule
Les english ............... en majuscule aussi
Les modaux sont suivis d'un infinitif (i must watched)
Je me servirais d'une fiche du site qui me semble très bien, elle s'intitule "Connecteurs : Argumenter un texte - cours"
Ce que je me dis aussi
......i would like to say something about....Je trouve la formule talk about plus légère ? (Lucile, ce n'est pas dire car je demande aussi pour moi 
)- than the others english lesson. regarder une leçon quand other est pronom ou quand il est adjectif.
Une bonne fin d'après midi
Réponse: Présentation /correction de lucile83, postée le 29-11-2013 à 18:17:10 (S | E)
Hello sanna,
Ce que je me dis aussi = ce que je pense aussi
On emploiera donc le verbe think;
what I think/am thinking also about is ...
Réponse: Présentation /correction de sanna6, postée le 29-11-2013 à 18:52:37 (S | E)
Thank you very much Lucile ..and I've taken note of it
Réponse: Présentation /correction de gerondif, postée le 29-11-2013 à 19:10:58 (S | E)
Hello,
Je voudrais savoir s'il y a beaucoup d'erreurs dans ma présentation de projet..euh, oui, mais on comprend ce que vous voulez dire.
I en majuscules partout svp, à votre âge, on doit savoir ça, même si certaines lettres de correspondants américains utilisent le i minuscule pour dire je, une erreur cependant.(majuscules à English aussi, c'est la base)
erreurs en bleu ou rose quand vous faites très fort, corrections en vert.
In the first place,(to begin with) i would like to say something about the english lesson(pluriel) in(at) the University. At first sight(ne convient pas, first seul suffira), it seems that (ne convient pas, First, I can say that// First, let's say that I was....)i was amazed about the difference in
During the first semester, first and foremost i worked mostly on (I tried to improve my)
In conclusion, during the first semester, i tried to improve my listening, my writing, my reading… Last, but not least, i think i found my weak points. I must improve my listening and my english speaking. For this, from my point of view, i must watched more english films and i must read more.
Keep it on !
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