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Message de camel posté le 13-10-2013 à 14:05:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pourriez-vous m'aidezsvp s'il vous plaît avec ce texte? J'ai vraiment besoin de la correction. Merci pour vos réponses 
People have always needed heroes. They have dedicated poems to heroes and built monuments for them. People have glorified, idolized and loved heroes. An hero was a sort of superman. There was nothing impossible to do for him. All of heroes had the same traits : strenght, honesty, justice and others. A hero was must be strong. Without strenght he was an ordinary man. That is what people thought before. And what about our days? Who can be considered to be hero now?
In my opinion, everybody has something heroic in the bottom of the heart. From time to time a man makes (performs) some truly great acts. For exemple he can help to poors, feed someone hungry, defend someone weak. That is all merite respect. But the true hero is good to people not from time to time but every day. He does not expect recognition for his acts, he makes people happy in silence. Because an hero must be modest. He defends a weak even he does not enjoy power. Because an hero must be brave. He does not take revenge on somebody who hurt him. Because an hero must be generous. He is not afraid of giving his life for saving someone's life. Because an hero must love people more than himself.
How often we meet heroes like this? There are few. And we do not know anything about them, because they stay in shadow of their generous acts. You do not have to be a superman for being considered to be hero. It is enough to be modest, brave, honest, generous and kind ordinary man. Everebody has to try to educate in himself an hero. Then the world will change.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-10-2013 14:17
Message de camel posté le 13-10-2013 à 14:05:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pourriez-vous m'aidez
People have always needed heroes. They have dedicated poems to heroes and built monuments for them. People have glorified, idolized and loved heroes. An hero was a sort of superman. There was nothing impossible to do for him. All of heroes had the same traits : strenght, honesty, justice and others. A hero was must be strong. Without strenght he was an ordinary man. That is what people thought before. And what about our days? Who can be considered to be hero now?
In my opinion, everybody has something heroic in the bottom of the heart. From time to time a man makes (performs) some truly great acts. For exemple he can help to poors, feed someone hungry, defend someone weak. That is all merite respect. But the true hero is good to people not from time to time but every day. He does not expect recognition for his acts, he makes people happy in silence. Because an hero must be modest. He defends a weak even he does not enjoy power. Because an hero must be brave. He does not take revenge on somebody who hurt him. Because an hero must be generous. He is not afraid of giving his life for saving someone's life. Because an hero must love people more than himself.
How often we meet heroes like this? There are few. And we do not know anything about them, because they stay in shadow of their generous acts. You do not have to be a superman for being considered to be hero. It is enough to be modest, brave, honest, generous and kind ordinary man. Everebody has to try to educate in himself an hero. Then the world will change.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-10-2013 14:17
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