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Message de polo45130 posté le 05-07-2013 à 19:17:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous!
Pourriez-vous regarder mon abstract et ainsi me dire ce qui ne va pas, les phrases qui ne sont pas anglaises, des expressions un peu trop 'bateau' qui ne font pas assez professionnelles... ?
Merci d'avance.
This final year project aims at the comparative study of 2 motorway buildings including one in Véigné in a seismic area 2 and the other one in Poitiers in a seismic area 3. The 2 buildings are carried out almost simultaneously from February 2013. The duration of the work is 4 months.
As a first step a thorough study of the regulations earthquake-resistant in force applied to our work in moderate seismic zone.
Then, this report shows the differences and similarities between the two types of building. The criteria: design, materials, cost, method of calculation and French and European standards were analyzed.
This study to quantify the impact of paraseismic regulations first at PS 92 and the EC8 then. For the company, a synthetic and financial report which can be used for their future studies of earthquake-resistant buildings.
In conclusion, it was a very nice experiment where I was able to apprehend the works engineer in a building’s global company.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-07-2013 21:43
Message de polo45130 posté le 05-07-2013 à 19:17:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous!
Pourriez-vous regarder mon abstract et ainsi me dire ce qui ne va pas, les phrases qui ne sont pas anglaises, des expressions un peu trop 'bateau' qui ne font pas assez professionnelles... ?
Merci d'avance.
This final year project aims at the comparative study of 2 motorway buildings including one in Véigné in a seismic area 2 and the other one in Poitiers in a seismic area 3. The 2 buildings are carried out almost simultaneously from February 2013. The duration of the work is 4 months.
As a first step a thorough study of the regulations earthquake-resistant in force applied to our work in moderate seismic zone.
Then, this report shows the differences and similarities between the two types of building. The criteria: design, materials, cost, method of calculation and French and European standards were analyzed.
This study to quantify the impact of paraseismic regulations first at PS 92 and the EC8 then. For the company, a synthetic and financial report which can be used for their future studies of earthquake-resistant buildings.
In conclusion, it was a very nice experiment where I was able to apprehend the works engineer in a building’s global company.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-07-2013 21:43
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