Essai /liberté des enfants
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Message de berlyn posté le 29-04-2013 à 21:27:15 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai une expression écrite à faire sur la question suivante : Est ce que les parents doivent laisser une total liberté à leurs enfants ? Pouvez-vous me corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
Since several years, many children would have a total freedom. When we are child, it is difficult for us to make difference between good and bad things but somtimes parents do too much to control their children's behaviour so that we wonder if parents should give us total freedom not.
However, in my opinion, it's not a good things to several reason. If you give total freedom to a child, he could do many stupid things. In fact, a free child can began for example to fumar or to stop study.
Moreover, in the newspapers or televison, I waw that young people take drugs or even murder people. I think it's because young people are not able to control themselves.
For me, owing to parents which give total freedom to their child, many young are not on the good way.
To conclued, it's very dangerous for me to give total freedom to a child.
Thanks a lot !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2013 22:26
Message de berlyn posté le 29-04-2013 à 21:27:15 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai une expression écrite à faire sur la question suivante : Est ce que les parents doivent laisser une total liberté à leurs enfants ? Pouvez-vous me corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
Since several years, many children would have a total freedom. When we are child, it is difficult for us to make difference between good and bad things but somtimes parents do too much to control their children's behaviour so that we wonder if parents should give us total freedom not.
However, in my opinion, it's not a good things to several reason. If you give total freedom to a child, he could do many stupid things. In fact, a free child can began for example to fumar or to stop study.
Moreover, in the newspapers or televison, I waw that young people take drugs or even murder people. I think it's because young people are not able to control themselves.
For me, owing to parents which give total freedom to their child, many young are not on the good way.
To conclued, it's very dangerous for me to give total freedom to a child.
Thanks a lot !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2013 22:26
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