Correction /introduction
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Message de myotica posté le 26-04-2013 à 13:17:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à vous !
J'ai besoin de vos corrections pour mon oral s'il vous plait. Ceci est seulement une partie de mon oral : l'introduction.
Merci beaucoup!
I am going to talk about the notion of Myth and Hero.
First of all, I would like to explain the notion.
Myths evoke the human condition as such. Mythical stories were first transmitted orally and often embodied by heroes, a place or community. The hero may be a fictional or real human being who highlighted the tradition, “history” and everyday life. Who is behind the image of the Queen?
I will first deal with the characteristic of the Queen.
Then, I will explain why is so difficult to the Queen having friends.
Finally, I will talk about the hiding image of the Queen.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2013 13:27
Message de myotica posté le 26-04-2013 à 13:17:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à vous !
J'ai besoin de vos corrections pour mon oral s'il vous plait. Ceci est seulement une partie de mon oral : l'introduction.
Merci beaucoup!
I am going to talk about the notion of Myth and Hero.
First of all, I would like to explain the notion.
Myths evoke the human condition as such. Mythical stories were first transmitted orally and often embodied by heroes, a place or community. The hero may be a fictional or real human being who highlighted the tradition, “history” and everyday life. Who is behind the image of the Queen?
I will first deal with the characteristic of the Queen.
Then, I will explain why is so difficult to the Queen having friends.
Finally, I will talk about the hiding image of the Queen.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2013 13:27
Réponse: Correction /introduction de bluestar, postée le 26-04-2013 à 13:44:07 (S | E)
Bonjour.
"Then, I will explain why is so difficult to the Queen having friends"
A reformuler: "...why it is...utilisez l'infinitif..."
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"hiding image"....Cet adjectif ne va pas.
Réponse: Correction /introduction de myotica, postée le 26-04-2013 à 14:08:55 (S | E)
pour votre réponse.Alors ça serait plutôt comme cela :
-Then, I will explain why it is so difficult to the Queen to have friends.
-Finally, I will talk about who is behind the image of the Queen.
Comme cela?
Réponse: Correction /introduction de bluestar, postée le 26-04-2013 à 17:26:25 (S | E)
Bonjour...
Then, I will explain why it is so difficult to for the Queen to have friends.
-Finally, I will talk about who is behind the image of the Queen.Je ne suis pas sûr de ce que vous voulez dire ici ...Perhaps you want to ask : "Who is the real person behind..." etc;
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Réponse: Correction /introduction de myotica, postée le 27-04-2013 à 19:06:39 (S | E)
Thank you for correcting me !
You are Helpful !
Yes, I wanted to mean that the Queen is just a person like us, she loves books, she has a life like us.
Sorry I was not understandable !
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