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Message de lenou54 posté le 25-04-2013 à 15:50:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
dans le cadre de mes études, je dois réaliser un mémoire infirmier. Je le réalise sur les émotions de l'infirmière face à la fin de vie. Mon résumé de ce travail doit être en anglais. Je l'ai déjà traduit et j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes.
Merci de votre aide
Le voici:
This dissertation was written during my training in nursing. I was particularly interested by: “the nurse’s emotional work when they meet people at the end of their life.”
I started my study on two situations at work, an experience that marked and touched me particularly.
I could see that accompanying a patient at the end of his life can be difficult for some nurses.
Further to analyze this work experience, I asked me questions, and then I developed my theoretical framework on the life’s end, caring and emotions.
My researches brought me to this question: “can people’s end of life be different depending on the nurse who accompanies” then I made two assumptions.
And then I made an interview with a nurse that should confirm or refute these hypotheses.
Through this work, I wanted to understand how caregivers’ emotions could have an impact on the coverage of patient and by who nurses can do with their emotions.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2013 22:37
Message de lenou54 posté le 25-04-2013 à 15:50:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
dans le cadre de mes études, je dois réaliser un mémoire infirmier. Je le réalise sur les émotions de l'infirmière face à la fin de vie. Mon résumé de ce travail doit être en anglais. Je l'ai déjà traduit et j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes.
Merci de votre aide
Le voici:
This dissertation was written during my training in nursing. I was particularly interested by: “the nurse’s emotional work when they meet people at the end of their life.”
I started my study on two situations at work, an experience that marked and touched me particularly.
I could see that accompanying a patient at the end of his life can be difficult for some nurses.
Further to analyze this work experience, I asked me questions, and then I developed my theoretical framework on the life’s end, caring and emotions.
My researches brought me to this question: “can people’s end of life be different depending on the nurse who accompanies” then I made two assumptions.
And then I made an interview with a nurse that should confirm or refute these hypotheses.
Through this work, I wanted to understand how caregivers’ emotions could have an impact on the coverage of patient and by who nurses can do with their emotions.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2013 22:37
Réponse: Correction/résumé mémoire de bluestar, postée le 25-04-2013 à 16:30:39 (S | E)
Bonjour..
This dissertation was written during my training in nursing. I was particularly interested by in : “the nurse’s emotional work when they meet people at the end of their life (pluriel).”
I started my study on two situations at work, an experience that marked and touched me particularly.
I could see that accompanying (treating?) a patient at the end of his life can be difficult for some nurses.
Further to analyze this work experience, I asked me
questions, and then I developed my theoretical framework on My researches brought me to this question: “can people’s end of life be different depending on the nurse who accompanies cares for them? ”; then I made two assumptions.
And then I made an interview with a nurse that should confirm or refute these hypotheses.
Throughout this work, I wanted to understand how caregivers’ emotions could have an impact on the coverage treatment of patient(pluriel) and by who ('how' serait mieux) nurses can do(un autre verbe )with their emotions.
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Modifié par bluestar le 25-04-2013 16:32
Réponse: Correction/résumé mémoire de lenou54, postée le 28-04-2013 à 16:22:37 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre réponse
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