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Message de juju356 posté le 13-04-2013 à 13:28:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
S'il vous plaît pourriez-vous corriger le texte à propos d'une invention ci dessous ?
Merci d'avance.
This video entitled: Will men and machines merge? Speak about a future innovation the man-machine merger. The person who speaks is Ray Kurzweil. He is an American author, inventor, and futurist. Mr Kurzweil says that in 2029 machine will be as smart as people. The purpose is that we implanting powerful devices that augment our abilities. With this invention we will become most intelligent and we will have more abilities. I think that it’s interesting for a person who is ill. For example a person who has Parkinson disease this type of technology can help for cure this illness. If this technology allow that a person ill cure it is very interesting. We must improve the technology to cure illness, if this method can help the medicine for all the brain disease. However improve our intelligence is ridiculous. We are enough intelligent!!! If we put one device in our brain we will become machine. The Machine will become most important than human and it’s dangerous if the machine can take a decision. The world will be commanded by a machine if everybody has a chip implanted in their brains. For the moment this innovation isn’t still in functioning. In few years we will may an idea most clearly about the possibilities of this technology.
To conclude, I think that this technology must be developed for medical research. But this innovation seems inutile for a person who has no problem of health. In 2029 we will see if this innovation can exist.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2013 17:39
Message de juju356 posté le 13-04-2013 à 13:28:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
S'il vous plaît pourriez-vous corriger le texte à propos d'une invention ci dessous ?
Merci d'avance.
This video entitled: Will men and machines merge? Speak about a future innovation the man-machine merger. The person who speaks is Ray Kurzweil. He is an American author, inventor, and futurist. Mr Kurzweil says that in 2029 machine will be as smart as people. The purpose is that we implanting powerful devices that augment our abilities. With this invention we will become most intelligent and we will have more abilities. I think that it’s interesting for a person who is ill. For example a person who has Parkinson disease this type of technology can help for cure this illness. If this technology allow that a person ill cure it is very interesting. We must improve the technology to cure illness, if this method can help the medicine for all the brain disease. However improve our intelligence is ridiculous. We are enough intelligent!!! If we put one device in our brain we will become machine. The Machine will become most important than human and it’s dangerous if the machine can take a decision. The world will be commanded by a machine if everybody has a chip implanted in their brains. For the moment this innovation isn’t still in functioning. In few years we will may an idea most clearly about the possibilities of this technology.
To conclude, I think that this technology must be developed for medical research. But this innovation seems inutile for a person who has no problem of health. In 2029 we will see if this innovation can exist.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2013 17:39
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