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Message de tom28 posté le 16-03-2013 à 11:36:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici mon travail
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-03-2013 11:55
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Modifié par tom28 le 17-03-2013 09:55
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Modifié par tom28 le 18-03-2013 19:56
Message de tom28 posté le 16-03-2013 à 11:36:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici mon travail
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-03-2013 11:55
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Modifié par tom28 le 17-03-2013 09:55
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Modifié par tom28 le 18-03-2013 19:56
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de lucile83, postée le 16-03-2013 à 11:58:32 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Merci pour votre message.Nous ne faisons jamais le travail à la place des membres. Vous le faites,vous le présentez sur les forums et nous vous aiderons ensuite sur la base de ce que vous nous montrerez.
Cordialement.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-03-2013 10:35
Je vois que vous avez fait votre travail
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de willy, postée le 16-03-2013 à 12:04:43 (S | E)
Hello!
Avant de refaire l'exercice, il faut revoir la théorie. Voici des cours de ce site :
Lien internet
NB : il ne faut pas hésiter à demander des explications, si c'est nécessaire.
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de tom28, postée le 17-03-2013 à 10:10:39 (S | E)
Si quelqu'un pouvait juste m'aider pour ces quelques phrases
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-03-2013 10:36
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de gerondif, postée le 17-03-2013 à 10:24:08 (S | E)
Bonjour,
1. A hurricane destroyed the town
2. Someone will show her a recent photograph of the man.
3. You must keep dogs on lead in this public garden.
4. People think that he is a terrorist.
5. They believe that he organized the 1999 bombing.
6. Can't people do anything about that ?
8. A computer could do this much more quickly.
9. They reported that hundreds of people were killed during the earthquake.
10. It was Nigel who took the photograph, not Keith.
Et aussi je sois réécrire le texte suivant en utilisant la voix passive à chaque fois que c'est possible. Ne mentionner le complément d'agent que s'il est nécessaire.
The car slowed and stopped in front of a large building. Then they asked me to get out.They blindfolded me. Someone unlocked a door and they led me through. "You must do as we tell you."Guards surrounded me. There was some noise outside. Apparently they were carrying boxes into the flat. Then someone sent for a doctor. I knew that they expected me to remove my clothes. While the doctor was examining me, I heard them make a phone call. Then they made me stand up again.
Mon travail:
1. The town was destroyed by a hurricane ok
2. She will be shown (manque le complément d'objet) by someone
3. In this public garden the dogs must be keep on lead
4. A terrorist that is what the people thought
5. The 1999 bombing was organized by them(non) une autre construction est attendue.
6. They can't be anything
7. These cars are make by a chinese firm
8. That could be do more quickly by a computer.
9. Hundreds of people were being killed during the earthquake they reported (n'est pas du passif, on attend une autre construction)
10.It was not a Keith who was taken the photograph, it was a Nigel (phot devrait être sujet du verbe passif)
Maintenant le texte:
It front of a large building a car was slowed and stopped. ((n'a rien à faire au passif)
Then they asked me to get out. (devrait être à la voix passive)
They blindfolded me.(devrait être à la voix passive)
A door was unlocked by someone (inutile) and I were lead they.
"As we tell you, you must be do".(faux.) (devrait être à la voix passive)
Guards surrounded me. (devrait être à la voix passive)
Outside there was being some noise.(faux) (devrait être à la voix passive)
Into the flat, they were being carrying boxes apparently.(faux) (devrait être à la voix passive)
Then someone sent for a doctor.(devrait être à la voix passive)
I removed my clothes because I knew that was the reason they expected me.(devrait être à la voix passive)
While I was being examining by the doctor, I heard them make a phone call.
Then, I stand up again because they made me. ((devrait être à la voix passive)(autre construction attendue)
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de lucile83, postée le 17-03-2013 à 10:34:38 (S | E)
Hello,
1. The town was destroyed by a hurricane ok
2. She will be shown complément manquant //by someone...inutile
3. In this public garden
4. A terrorist that is what the people thought à refaire en commençant par 'he is thought...'
5. The 1999 bombing was organized by them idem ici que la q4
6. They can't be anything à refaire; cherchez le nouveau sujet
7. These cars are make by a chinese firm il manque cette phrase à la voix active, mais 2 fautes (make + chinese)
8. That could be do...oops more quickely...orthographe by a computer
9. Hundreds of people were being killed during the earthquake they reported non, à refaire
10.It was not a Keith who was taken the photograph, it was a Nigel non, à refaire
Je ne me suis pas occupée du texte, gerondif s'en est chargé je vois
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de tom28, postée le 17-03-2013 à 11:03:21 (S | E)
Bonjour,
1. The town was destroyed by a hurricane ok
2. She will be shown to him a recent photograph of the man
3. Dogs must be kept on a lead in the public garden
4. He is thought that this is a terrorist
5. He is thought he organized the bombings of 1999
6. About that cannot be done by people
7. These cars are made by a Chinese firm
8. That could be done much more quickly by a computer
9. During the earthquake hundreds of people were killed
10.The photograph was taken by Nigel and not by Keith
Maintenant le texte:
It front of a large building a car was slowed and stopped.
Then I was asked to leave.
He was blindfolded me
A door was unlocked and they led me through
"What we tell you to do"
I was surrounded by guards
Outside there was some noise
Apparently the boxes were transported in the flat.
Then a doctor was sent
I removed my clothes Because I knew That was the reason I was expected
While I was being examine by the doctor, I heard them make a phone call.
Then again they made me stand on
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-03-2013 11:18
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Modifié par tom28 le 17-03-2013 14:26
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de tom28, postée le 17-03-2013 à 15:00:38 (S | E)
Et comme ça c'est mieux? j'ai essayé de tenir compte des conseils que vous m'avez donnés.
Merci d'avance à celui qui pourra vérifier.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-03-2013 15:45
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de lucile83, postée le 17-03-2013 à 15:45:25 (S | E)
Hello,
C'est mieux. J'ai laissé seulement les phrases à remanier;ce qui est barré est incorrect, à revoir; les autres phrases ne figurant pas ici sont justes.
Je n'ai vu que les phrases, pas le texte.
2. She will be shown
3. Dogs must be kept on a lead in this public garden
4. He is thought
5. He is
6.
9. During the earthquake hundreds of people were .......... killed où est l'idée de reported?
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de tom28, postée le 17-03-2013 à 16:38:59 (S | E)
Quelqu'un pourrait-il me donner la correction de l'ensemble
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-03-2013 18:12
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de lucile83, postée le 17-03-2013 à 18:15:39 (S | E)
Hello,
Commencez par donner votre correction finale des phrases.
On verra ensuite pour le texte car vous n'avez pas tout corrigé.
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de tom28, postée le 17-03-2013 à 18:48:19 (S | E)
Voici mes nouvelles phrases:
3. Dogs must be kept on a lead in this public garden
2. She will be shown a recent photograph of the man
9. They reported that during the earthquake hundreds of people were killed
5. He is believed he organized the bombings of 1999
4. He is thought he is a terrorist
6. About this can’t be done by people
Je ne sais pas si c'est bien mais j'ai des doutes pour la 6
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de gerondif, postée le 17-03-2013 à 18:55:47 (S | E)
Hello,
1. A hurricane destroyed the town
2. Someone will show her a recent photograph of the man.
3. You must keep dogs on lead in this public garden.
4. People think that he is a terrorist.
5. They believe that he organized the 1999 bombing.
6. Can't people do anything about that ?
8. A computer could do this much more quickly.
9. They reported that hundreds of people were killed during the earthquake.
10. It was Nigel who took the photograph, not Keith.
3. Dogs must be kept on a lead in this public garden: ok
2. She will be shown a recent photograph of the man: ok
9. They reported that during the earthquake hundreds of people were killed
Hundreds of people comme sujet, report au prétérit passif + to have been killed + complément de temps.
5. He is believed (+ infinitif passé passif avoir organisé)he organized the bombings of 1999
4. He is thought (mettre le verbe être à l'infinitif complet)he is a terrorist
6. can’t (manque anything comme sujet ici) be done about this?
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de tom28, postée le 17-03-2013 à 19:08:41 (S | E)
J'ai pensé à cela pour la 9:
They reported that hundreds of people have been killed during the earthquake
Et pour le texte qu'en pensez-vous:
It front of a large building a car was slowed and stopped.
Then I was asked to leave.
He was blindfolded me
A door was unlocked and they led me through
"What we tell you to do"
I was surrounded by guards
Outside there was some noise
Apparently the boxes were transported in the flat.
Then a doctor was sent
I removed my clothes Because I knew That was the reason I was expected
While I was being examine by the doctor, I heard them make a phone call.
Then again they made me stand on
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de gerondif, postée le 17-03-2013 à 19:29:23 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
pour la 9 je vous ai donné le modèle.
The car slowed and stopped in front of a large building. Then they asked me to get out.They blindfolded me. Someone unlocked a door and they led me through. "You must do as we tell you."Guards surrounded me. There was some noise outside. Apparently they were carrying boxes into the flat. Then someone sent for a doctor. I knew that they expected me to remove my clothes. While the doctor was examining me, I heard them make a phone call. Then they made me stand up again.
It front of a large building a car was slowed and stopped.(cette phrase n'a rien à faire au passif)
Then I was asked to leave(get out va bien mieux pour une voiture). ok
He was blindfolded me(manque le sujet qui subit l'action...)
A door was unlocked ok
and they led me through (peut se mettre au passif)
"What we tell you to do"(grand n'imp!!) il faut garder you must do what et terminer au passif .
I was surrounded by guards ok
Outside there was some noise ok, mais peut se mettre au passif.
Apparently
Then a doctor was sent for
I removed my clothes Because I knew I was expected to (les enlever)
While I was being examine(part passé) by the doctor, presque ok
I heard them make a phone call.(peut se mettre au passif à la rigueur)
Then again they made me stand on ok mais
je ne sais pas si votre cours était assez pointu pour qu'on vous ait appris: "they had me stand up" qui existe.
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de willy, postée le 17-03-2013 à 20:25:08 (S | E)
Hello!
Ne pas omettre d'utiliser le passif dans la dernière phrase :
And then again I was made to stand up.
PS : mes conseils ci-dessus restent d'actualité !
Réponse: Voix passive/aide de tom28, postée le 17-03-2013 à 21:11:43 (S | E)
à tous,je crois que j'ai enfin réussi.Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
