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Message de truth posté le 21-02-2013 à 22:53:12 (S | E | F)
Hello
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce mail s'il vous plaît?
Thank you for your answers..
Good evening,
Lately English became my priority, even more since I applied for your compagnie and you gave me about the importance of having a good level. I add that I can follow a simple discussion, read, understand and respond to emails.
I pledge to work hard to be as efficient as possible.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2013 07:36
Message de truth posté le 21-02-2013 à 22:53:12 (S | E | F)
Hello
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce mail s'il vous plaît?
Thank you for your answers..
Good evening,
Lately English became my priority, even more since I applied for your compagnie and you gave me about the importance of having a good level. I add that I can follow a simple discussion, read, understand and respond to emails.
I pledge to work hard to be as efficient as possible.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2013 07:36
Réponse: Mail /answer de joebrodie, postée le 22-02-2013 à 09:58:38 (S | E)
Bonjour!
Voilà ce que je remarque, si ça peut aider:
Good evening,
Lately (j'éviterais dans l'absolu: avant, ça ne l'était pas...) English has become my priority (j'utiliserais le pst perfect ici, mais sans obligation), even more since I applied for (a job?) with your company and you gave me about the importance of having a good level (vous êtes sûr(e) de cette expression "to give about?"). I would add that I can follow a simple conversation, read, understand and answer emails.
I am ready to work hard to be as efficient as possible.
Having a good level est très mot à mot. Pensez à "being fluent in English/almost fluent in English".
"Respond" signifie plutôt une réaction, comme "response". C'est answer tout simplement.
Bonne continuation!
JB
Réponse: Mail /answer de truth, postée le 23-02-2013 à 17:20:10 (S | E)
Thanks a lot
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