Reality TV show/Correction
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Message de kennylouis posté le 12-01-2013 à 18:54:45 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir, bonjour à tous.
J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez, s'il vous plait, à corriger mon écrit qui me sera utile pour une vidéo que j'ai à présenter à ma classe. (J'y ai pris énormément de temps)
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses
We will present you a new concept of tv reality with extraordinary candidates and an unique price to win. His name is Grandparent's dream.
We are here because we reckon that "Grandparent's dream" is a new way to see the reality TV. We hope that you, pnnel of productors, will finance this project.
We invite you to watch the trailer of it.
Twelve grandparents
registered by their children or their grandchildren
Twelve candidates
from 70 years old to 90 years old will live together during ten weeks. Each week they have to take part to various challenges like test of general knowledge or a lot of other challenges which you will discover later. You will see now a extract of challenges imposed.
Every week there are several challenges.
At the end of this challenges, the winner is saved of the eliminations. At the end of the week there are some people who are immunized. There is one candidate who is evicted each week.
The grandparents believe the public who vote for his favorite candidate.
But, in reality, their grandchildren are hidden in a room : the jury's room.
And the grandchildren must voted for a candidate who would like see kicked out.
They must send their grandparent in the final.
The candidates nominated are interviwed to tell you why they deserve to win.
At the final, the public will vote.
The price
At the end, the only winner gain the right to end their lives in a beautiful and Luxurious retirement home.
SEEN ON THE SEA,PARK,THEATER,PRIVATE BEACH,MASSAGE EVERYDAY,HAIRDRESSER,makeup PROFESSIONAL,DELUXE KITCHEN, DOCTORS 24/24, FUN ACTIVITIES, A SERVANT FOR EACH PERSON and lots of other surprises
THE GOAL OF THE « GRANDPARENT'S DREAM »
We want show that there is not age to take part in a tv reality.
The purpose of this program is to center the older characters and give them a second life.
Otherwise this issue is entertaining, fun and it will appreciate to return to after a long day of work.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-01-2013 18:58
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Modifié par kennylouis le 13-01-2013 09:39
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Modifié par kennylouis le 13-01-2013 09:42
Message de kennylouis posté le 12-01-2013 à 18:54:45 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir, bonjour à tous.
J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez, s'il vous plait, à corriger mon écrit qui me sera utile pour une vidéo que j'ai à présenter à ma classe. (J'y ai pris énormément de temps)
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses
We will present you a new concept of tv reality with extraordinary candidates and an unique price to win. His name is Grandparent's dream.
We are here because we reckon that "Grandparent's dream" is a new way to see the reality TV. We hope that you, pnnel of productors, will finance this project.
We invite you to watch the trailer of it.
Twelve grandparents
registered by their children or their grandchildren
Twelve candidates
from 70 years old to 90 years old will live together during ten weeks. Each week they have to take part to various challenges like test of general knowledge or a lot of other challenges which you will discover later. You will see now a extract of challenges imposed.
Every week there are several challenges.
At the end of this challenges, the winner is saved of the eliminations. At the end of the week there are some people who are immunized. There is one candidate who is evicted each week.
The grandparents believe the public who vote for his favorite candidate.
But, in reality, their grandchildren are hidden in a room : the jury's room.
And the grandchildren must voted for a candidate who would like see kicked out.
They must send their grandparent in the final.
The candidates nominated are interviwed to tell you why they deserve to win.
At the final, the public will vote.
The price
At the end, the only winner gain the right to end their lives in a beautiful and Luxurious retirement home.
SEEN ON THE SEA,PARK,THEATER,PRIVATE BEACH,MASSAGE EVERYDAY,HAIRDRESSER,makeup PROFESSIONAL,DELUXE KITCHEN, DOCTORS 24/24, FUN ACTIVITIES, A SERVANT FOR EACH PERSON and lots of other surprises
THE GOAL OF THE « GRANDPARENT'S DREAM »
We want show that there is not age to take part in a tv reality.
The purpose of this program is to center the older characters and give them a second life.
Otherwise this issue is entertaining, fun and it will appreciate to return to after a long day of work.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-01-2013 18:58
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Modifié par kennylouis le 13-01-2013 09:39
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Modifié par kennylouis le 13-01-2013 09:42
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