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Message de galou25 posté le 11-12-2012 à 20:02:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis en 2eme annèe de pharmacie et je dois réaliser un exposé de 5 min sur le sujet suivant : "eating 5 fruits and vetetables per day".
N'etant pas très forte en anglais j'aurais aimé quelques conseils et si possible une petite correction ! je vous remercie de tout mon coeur sincèrement !!
)
voici mon exposé : (la partie XXX signifie simplement que je souhaite rajouter un petit pararaphe que je n'ai pas encore eu le temps de pofiner !)
The subject of my presentation is « eating 5 fruits and vegetables per day »
« eating 5 fruits and vegetables per day » is a message set up by the autorities of heath to fight against the obesity.
Since 2008, The French law imposes on the marks(brands) of foodstuffs to introduce sanitary messages into their advertisements.
For exemple : « for your heath, eating 5 fruits and vegatable per day » or still " For your health, avoid eating too fat, too much sweetened, too salty(steep) "
Products concerned by this measure are the food in which there is addition of salt, sugar, sweeteners...
It is a measure that aims to sensitize the public, especially children, and to give nutritional marks stemming from the national Program nutrition health
This measure aims at contributing to the prevention of the diseases bound(connected) to an unbalanced food and an unhealthy lifestyle
(diabetes, obesity, cardiovascular diseases, certain cancers).
The fight againts an unhealthy lifestyle and the fight against obesity became a priority of public health in France.
The recommandation of 5 fruits and vegetables a day is a minimal proposal. It is possible of course and even recommanded to eat it more, to assure its needs in any circumstances.
It is question in fact of 5 portions of fruits and vegetables. For exemple : 3 portions of fruits and 2 portions of vegetabes.
Research proves that eating at least 5 portions of fruits and vegetables each day has very health benefits.
It can help to prevent cardiovascular diseases, diabetes, obesity and some cancers.
Why it is necessary to consume 5 fruits and vegetables per day ?
Because they are rich in vitamins, in minerals, in fibers and because their favorable effect on the health was demonstrated.
These micronutriments do not almost bring calories and are nevertheless indispensable to the smooth running of our boby.
They have a protective rôle in the prevention of diseases appearing to the adulthood, as cancers, cardiovacular disease,...That is why it is important that this measure addresses to the children.
Vegetables and fruits have a content calcuim and potassium which allows them to participate in the fight against osteoporosis.
Thes act by maintaining a good acido-basic balance in our body and limit the flights of calcium to the urinary level.
Vegetables and fruits have an additional rôle : they satisfy by bringing few calories.
XXXX
Furthermore for better one higiene of life it is to recommend to practise a regular physical activity
However, many of us are not listening ti this heathy eting advice.
And don't forget for your health eat 5 fuits and legumes by days !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-12-2012 22:34
Message de galou25 posté le 11-12-2012 à 20:02:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis en 2eme annèe de pharmacie et je dois réaliser un exposé de 5 min sur le sujet suivant : "eating 5 fruits and vetetables per day".
N'etant pas très forte en anglais j'aurais aimé quelques conseils et si possible une petite correction ! je vous remercie de tout mon coeur sincèrement !!
)voici mon exposé : (la partie XXX signifie simplement que je souhaite rajouter un petit pararaphe que je n'ai pas encore eu le temps de pofiner !)
The subject of my presentation is « eating 5 fruits and vegetables per day »
« eating 5 fruits and vegetables per day » is a message set up by the autorities of heath to fight against the obesity.
Since 2008, The French law imposes on the marks(brands) of foodstuffs to introduce sanitary messages into their advertisements.
For exemple : « for your heath, eating 5 fruits and vegatable per day » or still " For your health, avoid eating too fat, too much sweetened, too salty(steep) "
Products concerned by this measure are the food in which there is addition of salt, sugar, sweeteners...
It is a measure that aims to sensitize the public, especially children, and to give nutritional marks stemming from the national Program nutrition health
This measure aims at contributing to the prevention of the diseases bound(connected) to an unbalanced food and an unhealthy lifestyle
(diabetes, obesity, cardiovascular diseases, certain cancers).
The fight againts an unhealthy lifestyle and the fight against obesity became a priority of public health in France.
The recommandation of 5 fruits and vegetables a day is a minimal proposal. It is possible of course and even recommanded to eat it more, to assure its needs in any circumstances.
It is question in fact of 5 portions of fruits and vegetables. For exemple : 3 portions of fruits and 2 portions of vegetabes.
Research proves that eating at least 5 portions of fruits and vegetables each day has very health benefits.
It can help to prevent cardiovascular diseases, diabetes, obesity and some cancers.
Why it is necessary to consume 5 fruits and vegetables per day ?
Because they are rich in vitamins, in minerals, in fibers and because their favorable effect on the health was demonstrated.
These micronutriments do not almost bring calories and are nevertheless indispensable to the smooth running of our boby.
They have a protective rôle in the prevention of diseases appearing to the adulthood, as cancers, cardiovacular disease,...That is why it is important that this measure addresses to the children.
Vegetables and fruits have a content calcuim and potassium which allows them to participate in the fight against osteoporosis.
Thes act by maintaining a good acido-basic balance in our body and limit the flights of calcium to the urinary level.
Vegetables and fruits have an additional rôle : they satisfy by bringing few calories.
XXXX
Furthermore for better one higiene of life it is to recommend to practise a regular physical activity
However, many of us are not listening ti this heathy eting advice.
And don't forget for your health eat 5 fuits and legumes by days !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-12-2012 22:34
Réponse: Exposé/ 5 fruits et légumes de gerondif, postée le 11-12-2012 à 22:45:21 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
votre traducteur ne s'est pas trop planté (quoique, quand je relis.....) pour une fois et c'est relativement lisible en l'état mais la trame française transparaît:
parfois, le mot français est resté:
Vegetables and fruits have an additional rôle
Parfois, votre erreur dans le texte français est traduite telle quelle en anglais:
Vous avez dû écrire: il est recommander de.....
it is to recommend to practise a regular physical activity
Quand on a le choix entre deux synonymes, c'est souvent un travail de traducteurs:
The French law imposes on the marks(brands)
Parfois c'est carrément faux:
ils suffisent à apporter:they satisfy by bringing aïe !!
une autre amusante:
salty: salé, ok! steep: salée pour une facture, une addition dans le sens de raide!!
For your health, avoid eating too fat, too much sweetened, too salty(steep)
Bon courage quand même!
je me demande si en tapant 5 fruit and vegetables a day sur google, vous ne tomberiez pas sur des textes eux écrits en anglais d'origine dont vous pourriez vous inspirer. (en fait, je l'ai fait hier soir et je suis tombé sur de bons textes et même 30 minutes de pub avec texte type karaoké me vantant les mérites d'une boîte de régimes...)
Réponse: Exposé/ 5 fruits et légumes de anonyme, postée le 12-12-2012 à 09:03:51 (S | E)
gerondif, ne soyez pas trop sévère avec galou : elle n'a que sept ans ! Et être en seconde année de pharmacie à cet âge mérite la plus grande indulgence…
Bonne journée à tous deux l
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