Correction/obsolescence
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Message de juju356 posté le 09-12-2012 à 21:24:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Pourriez-vous corriger le résumé suivant:
This video is about planned obsolescence and perceived obsolescence. Ms _____ start by deals with planned obsolescence. Planned obsolescence is a word who mean make for the bin. Manufacturer want that his product is break the faster possible because if the customer is enough satisfied with this product, he return buy a product in the same shop.
We can think that they make this strategies for little object whereas they make this for all. Computer, barbecue… For example todays a computer is efficient approximately two years because the technology progress quickly. Ms _____ say that only one piece changes all the years but this piece is always make with different forms and it is a very important piece.
Then there are perceived obsolescence. Objects don’t break fast enough so Designers thought at perceived obsolescence. This form of obsolescence consists at make new models that are in fashion. New models aren’t more performing that ancient model but more beautiful. When you see on the desk of your colleague all his material is matching you want the same thing. It’s functioning of perceived obsolescence. Ms _____ takes as example spike heel and large heel. She says that if you put large heel one year where the fashion is spike heel you are considered as out of fashion. The fashion is dictated by media in particularly with the advertisements. In U.S.A you see more advertisements in one year that someone lived in 1950 have seen during all his live.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-12-2012 21:42
Message de juju356 posté le 09-12-2012 à 21:24:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Pourriez-vous corriger le résumé suivant:
This video is about planned obsolescence and perceived obsolescence. Ms _____ start by deals with planned obsolescence. Planned obsolescence is a word who mean make for the bin. Manufacturer want that his product is break the faster possible because if the customer is enough satisfied with this product, he return buy a product in the same shop.
We can think that they make this strategies for little object whereas they make this for all. Computer, barbecue… For example todays a computer is efficient approximately two years because the technology progress quickly. Ms _____ say that only one piece changes all the years but this piece is always make with different forms and it is a very important piece.
Then there are perceived obsolescence. Objects don’t break fast enough so Designers thought at perceived obsolescence. This form of obsolescence consists at make new models that are in fashion. New models aren’t more performing that ancient model but more beautiful. When you see on the desk of your colleague all his material is matching you want the same thing. It’s functioning of perceived obsolescence. Ms _____ takes as example spike heel and large heel. She says that if you put large heel one year where the fashion is spike heel you are considered as out of fashion. The fashion is dictated by media in particularly with the advertisements. In U.S.A you see more advertisements in one year that someone lived in 1950 have seen during all his live.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-12-2012 21:42
Réponse: Correction/obsolescence de robertbrou, postée le 11-12-2012 à 18:15:31 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je suggère que vous lisiez un texte en anglais sur le sujet. Je ne suis pas sûr si j'ai(e) tout marqué/d'avoir tout indiqué/contrôlé, mais c'est un début. Les corrections vertes/en vert sont offertes. Revoir ce qui est en rose. Pour les ( ? ) et les expressions soulignées, je ne suis pas sûr de ce que vous (veuillez)voulez dire.
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