Changement climatique/correction
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Message de zawa posté le 28-11-2012 à 21:11:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai enconre un commentaire à faire sur les changements climatiques. Voici mon travail. Serait-il possible que quelqu'un re-jette un coup d'oeil pour voir les fautes de grammaire, pour que je puisse les corriger ?
Merci d'avance !
Firstly we will see if these climatic changes are simple threats or realities.
Then we will see how states organize them self to face up to this problem.
In four decades, scientists estimate that the temperature will rise from 2 to 6 ° C. Actually, we know that Siberia has increased by 3 ° C.
Currently, the temperature rise is less than 0.5 ° C, but the impacts are already visible: melting glaciers, rising sea-levels ...
There is a impact on the flora and fauna already visible. For example, we assist to a disappearance of the Sahara Desert. Sand and scorpions are exchanged for vegetation, this is due to climate change
These changes may seem insignificant. But it is the speed with which they make it that make us worry. What is 40 years near to 4 billion years of life on earth?
These climatic changes could cause the disappearance of many species. And why not leads Humans to the disappearance because of the rising water, malnutrition, or drought.
Then we will move to our second part, where we will see how states organize them self to struggle against this problem.
To fight against climate change, we have seen in the text previously studied that the army I quote L16 "cut back on its fuel costs" and "installed solar arrays and wind turbines."
But these developments are expensive. These measures would therefore accessible only to rich countries?
Many treaties are set, especially during the Rio conference in 1992: "to reduce the use of greenhouse gas emissions between 2008 and 2012." Modalities of implementation were specified in the Kyoto Protocol and adopted by 171 countries.
The search is too at the service of the environment to limit the pollution with the development of electric car and taxs for polluting car
In conclusion we could say that the fight against climate change has become a major issue in our society. It could have many repercussions on our environment, that why Humans set up treaties and look for innovation to limit the pollution and so the climate change.
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Modifié par zawa le 28-11-2012 21:11
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2012 22:21
Message de zawa posté le 28-11-2012 à 21:11:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai enconre un commentaire à faire sur les changements climatiques. Voici mon travail. Serait-il possible que quelqu'un re-jette un coup d'oeil pour voir les fautes de grammaire, pour que je puisse les corriger ?
Merci d'avance !
Firstly we will see if these climatic changes are simple threats or realities.
Then we will see how states organize them self to face up to this problem.
In four decades, scientists estimate that the temperature will rise from 2 to 6 ° C. Actually, we know that Siberia has increased by 3 ° C.
Currently, the temperature rise is less than 0.5 ° C, but the impacts are already visible: melting glaciers, rising sea-levels ...
There is a impact on the flora and fauna already visible. For example, we assist to a disappearance of the Sahara Desert. Sand and scorpions are exchanged for vegetation, this is due to climate change
These changes may seem insignificant. But it is the speed with which they make it that make us worry. What is 40 years near to 4 billion years of life on earth?
These climatic changes could cause the disappearance of many species. And why not leads Humans to the disappearance because of the rising water, malnutrition, or drought.
Then we will move to our second part, where we will see how states organize them self to struggle against this problem.
To fight against climate change, we have seen in the text previously studied that the army I quote L16 "cut back on its fuel costs" and "installed solar arrays and wind turbines."
But these developments are expensive. These measures would therefore accessible only to rich countries?
Many treaties are set, especially during the Rio conference in 1992: "to reduce the use of greenhouse gas emissions between 2008 and 2012." Modalities of implementation were specified in the Kyoto Protocol and adopted by 171 countries.
The search is too at the service of the environment to limit the pollution with the development of electric car and taxs for polluting car
In conclusion we could say that the fight against climate change has become a major issue in our society. It could have many repercussions on our environment, that why Humans set up treaties and look for innovation to limit the pollution and so the climate change.
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Modifié par zawa le 28-11-2012 21:11
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2012 22:21
Réponse: Changement climatique/correction de gerondif, postée le 28-11-2012 à 23:48:05 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
First(ly) we will see if these climatic changes are simple threats or realities.
Then we will see how states organize them self to face up to this problem.
In four decades, scientists estimate that the temperature will rise from 2 to 6 ° C. Actually(= en realité), we know that Siberia's(temperature) has increased by 3 ° C.(
Currently, the temperature rise is less than 0.5 ° C, but the impacts are already visible: melting glaciers, rising sea-levels ...
There is a impact on the flora and fauna already visible. For example, we assist to a disappearance of the Sahara Desert. Sand and scorpions are exchanged for vegetation, this is due to climate change
These changes may seem insignificant. But it is the speed with which they make it(changes était pluriel) that make us worry. What is 40 years near to 4 billion years of life on earth?
These climatic changes could cause the disappearance of many species. And why not leads Humans to the disappearance because of the rising water(ce n'est pas l'eau qui monte mais son niveau), malnutrition, or drought.
Then we will move to our second part, where we will see how states organize them self to struggle against this problem.
To fight against climate change, we have seen in the text previously studied that the army I quote L16 "cut back on its fuel costs" and "installed solar arrays and wind turbines."
But these developments are expensive. These measures would therefore(verbe être) accessible only to rich countries?
Many treaties are (prétérit)set, especially during the Rio conference in 1992: "to reduce the use of greenhouse gas emissions between 2008 and 2012." Modalities of implementation were specified in the Kyoto Protocol and adopted by 171 countries.
The search(la fouille° is too at the service of the environment to limit the pollution with the development of electric car and taxs(pluriel des mots en x) for polluting cars
In conclusion we could say that the fight against climate change has become a major issue in our society. It could have many repercussions on our environment, that is why Humans(sonne faux) set up treaties and look for innovation to limit the pollution and so the climate change.
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