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Message de mar4gaux posté le 02-11-2012 à 12:40:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
nous sommes en seconde et avons un exposé sur Descartes à faire; nous avons pas mal commencé.
Nous remercions beaucoup d'avance tous ceux qui nous aideront à corriger notre devoir!
René Descartes
René Descartes was born on March, 31st 1596 and dead on February, 11th 1650 at 53 years old. He was a philosopher, a matematican and a writer French who is famous for his scientifical discoveries and his theories about science and philosophy. He said that the science and the philosophy are bind and work on one on the other. He has putted a stop to the Aristotalisme and has created the Universal science.
René Descartes did research about the cause of the Universe and the nature of the matter. About this subject he wrote «Méditations sur la philosophie première» that is a book about rationalism.
He has wrote too, in 1629, «Règles pour la direction de l'esprit» that was not finished. In this book there are 21 rules for wend his spirit.
He has disrupt the knowledges of his era.
He has digitized geometry and therefore has resolved one of the most important idea of the mathematics: link the geometry to the algebra.
He has developed, with Pierre Fermat, the method of the coordinates who allow to do more easily demonstrations of geometry.
He do too become the letters from status of «unknown» to the satus of «real».
He has used the word function for f(x).
He has wrote too a book called «La géométrie» published in 1637.
Merci encore de votre aide. Elle est précieuse!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2012 12:58
Message de mar4gaux posté le 02-11-2012 à 12:40:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
nous sommes en seconde et avons un exposé sur Descartes à faire; nous avons pas mal commencé.
Nous remercions beaucoup d'avance tous ceux qui nous aideront à corriger notre devoir!
René Descartes
René Descartes was born on March, 31st 1596 and dead on February, 11th 1650 at 53 years old. He was a philosopher, a matematican and a writer French who is famous for his scientifical discoveries and his theories about science and philosophy. He said that the science and the philosophy are bind and work on one on the other. He has putted a stop to the Aristotalisme and has created the Universal science.
René Descartes did research about the cause of the Universe and the nature of the matter. About this subject he wrote «Méditations sur la philosophie première» that is a book about rationalism.
He has wrote too, in 1629, «Règles pour la direction de l'esprit» that was not finished. In this book there are 21 rules for wend his spirit.
He has disrupt the knowledges of his era.
He has digitized geometry and therefore has resolved one of the most important idea of the mathematics: link the geometry to the algebra.
He has developed, with Pierre Fermat, the method of the coordinates who allow to do more easily demonstrations of geometry.
He do too become the letters from status of «unknown» to the satus of «real».
He has used the word function for f(x).
He has wrote too a book called «La géométrie» published in 1637.
Merci encore de votre aide. Elle est précieuse!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2012 12:58
Réponse: Exposé / Descartes de bernard02, postée le 02-11-2012 à 15:40:52 (S | E)
Bonjour,
je vous repère en bleu quelques fautes que j'ai remarquées:
"René Descartes was born on March, 31st 1596 and dead on February, 11th 1650 at 53 years old. He was a philosopher, a matematican (faute) and a writer French (à l'envers) who is famous for his scientifical (faute) discoveries and his theories about science and philosophy. He said that the science and the philosophy are bind and work on one on the other. He has putted (faute) a stop to the Aristotalisme (faute) and has created (faute) the Universal science.
René Descartes did research about the cause of the Universe and the nature of the matter. About this subject he wrote «Méditations sur la philosophie première» that is a book about rationalism.
He has wrote (faute) too, in 1629, «Règles pour la direction de l'esprit» that was not finished. In this book there are 21 rules for wend (faute) his spirit.
He has disrupt the knowledges of his era.
He has digitized (faute) geometry and therefore has resolved one of the most important idea of the mathematics: link the geometry to the algebra.
He has developed, with Pierre Fermat, the method of the coordinates who allow (faute) to do more easily demonstrations of geometry.
He do too become (faute) the letters from status of «unknown» to the satus (faute) of «real».
He has used the word function for f(x).
He has wrote (faute) too a book called «La géométrie» published in 1637."
Cordialement.
Réponse: Exposé / Descartes de notrepere, postée le 02-11-2012 à 20:56:14 (S | E)
BonjourRené Descartes was born on March, 31st 1596 and dead
on February, 11th 1650 at 53 years old. He was a philosopher, a matematican and a writer French (ordre) who is famous for his scientifical discoveries and his theories about science and philosophy. He said that the science and the philosophy are bind and work on one on the other (cet extrait n'a aucun sens). He has(temps) putted a stop to the Aristotalisme
and has created the Universal science.René Descartes did research about the cause
of the Universe and the nature of the matter. About this subject he wrote «Méditations sur la philosophie première» that is a book about rationalism.He has wrote (temps) too, in 1629, «Règles pour la direction de l'esprit» that
was not finished. In this book there are 21 rules for wend his spirit .He has disrupt
the knowledges of his era.He has digitized
geometry and therefore has resolved one of the most important ideaL'un des... mot pluriel; of the mathematics: link the geometry to the algebra.He has developed, with Pierre Fermat, the method of the coordinates who allow to do more easily demonstrations of geometry.
Cette phrase n'a aucun sens.He do too become the letters from status of «unknown» to the satus of «real».
idemHe has used the word function for f(x).
He has wrote too a book called «La géométrie» published in 1637.
Il est probable que votre texte provient d'un traducteur en ligne, non ? Vous ne comprenez pas l'emploi de present perfect en anglais. Je vous conseille de le revoir.
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Modifié par notrepere le 03-11-2012 02:25
You're probably right, L. A machine probably wouldn't have used all of those present perfect tenses.
Réponse: Exposé / Descartes de lucile83, postée le 02-11-2012 à 21:00:51 (S | E)
Hello bernard
Pourquoi selon vous certains verbes au present perfect sont faux, et pas tous?? quelque chose m'échappe
Hello np
I think a machine would have done a better work
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