Need help/ rédaction

Need help/ rédaction
Message de petitsbeurreslu posté le 28-10-2012 à 17:53:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,

J'ai une petite rédaction à faire en anglais, que je devrais présenter à l'oral On doit parler d'une période historique qu'on aimerait vivre, j'ai choisi la Révolution Française ;)
Je bloque sur certains points, vous pouvez m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour vos réponses.

I will talk about a historical period which is very interessant ou interesting to me
J'hésite entre les deux, d'habitude je met interesting mais là ça sonne un peu bizarre :/
Obviously, I haven't chosen this period for it comfortable and peaceful lifestyle, because we know it was a troubled time and it wasn't easy to survive.
No, I would have liked living ou to live during this period because this is a turning point of the French History.
I think It would have been very interesting to live those events. Là encore je ne suis pas certain de la conjugaison...
But, if I could lived during this period, I would have been a peasant living in the depths of the countryside, far away from where the history was played.
From this point of view, I think it wouldn't have been very interesting!
However, this period has been crucial for us, and that's why I chose it.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-10-2012 18:28

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Réponse: Need help/ rédaction de saphy, postée le 28-10-2012 à 18:17:20 (S | E)
Bonjour,

C'est bien interesting.
Interessant n'existe pas en anglais.
Il y a bien deux mots que les élèves confondent souvent, interesting (= intéressant)et interested (=intéressé-e).
Mais il ne faut jamais dire interessant en anglais!

Cheers !

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Réponse: Need help/ rédaction de saphy, postée le 28-10-2012 à 18:24:59 (S | E)
As to the rest:

Obviously, I haven't chosen this period for it comfortable and peaceful lifestyle, because we know it was a troubled time and it wasn't easy to survive.
No, I would have liked living during this period because this is (it was) a turning point of the French History.
I think It (it, coquille je suppose) would have been very interesting to live those (these, parce qu'avec those, tu rejettes la chose et là tu veux les vivre donc mieux vaut ne pas les rejeter!) events. Là encore je ne suis pas certain de la conjugaison... (je ne vois pas de problème)

But, if I could lived (arg! modal+Base Verbale) during this period, I would have been a peasant living in the depths of the countryside, far away from where the history (ici, tu veux dire History ou story??) was played (not a video-game).
From this point of view, I think it wouldn't have been very interesting!
However, this period has been crucial for us, and that's why I chose it. (j'aurai mis "to us" mais c'est discutable et plutôt d'un niveau C1)
xxx
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-10-2012 18:32

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Réponse: Need help/ rédaction de notrepere, postée le 28-10-2012 à 22:46:04 (S | E)
Bonjour

Je ne trouve pas les mêmes erreurs que saphy. A vous de choisir la correction que vous préférez.

I will talk about a historical period which is very (interessant ou) interesting to me.
Obviously, I haven't chosen this period for its comfortable and peaceful lifestyle(pas le bon mot), because we know it was a troubled time and it wasn't easy to survive.

No, I would have liked living ou to live during this period because this is (ou 'it was') a turning point (of the) in French History.

I think It would have been very interesting to live (forme 'ing' vaut mieux à mon avis) those events.

But, if I could have lived during this period, I would have been a peasant living in the depths of the countryside, far away from where (the) history was played out (assez ) ou took place .

From this point of view, I think it wouldn't have been very interesting!

However, this period has been crucial for us, and that's why I chose it.

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Réponse: Need help/ rédaction de petitsbeurreslu, postée le 30-10-2012 à 22:31:36 (S | E)
Merci à vous! J'ai remplacé "kifestyle" par "way of life" je pense que ça correspond mieux, et j'ai corrigé les fautes ;)

Bonne soirée!

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